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morago

+ Without Breath [Beast]

Jan 18, 2011 17:53

Title: Without Breath
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Junhyung/Doojoon, Yoseob
Word Count: ~7400
Notes: For nautisch for b2stsanta. AU heavily based on the Soom MV. Thanks to biases for all the support every step of the way. Originally posted here.
Summary: Junhyung's stomach clenches tight and the feeling rises to his chest, gripping onto all of his organs and it's the ( Read more... )

fandom; beast/b2st, character; yoseob, character; junhyung, character; doojoon, rating; pg-13, pairing; junhyung/doojoon

Comments 27

tinyscribbles80 January 18 2011, 13:28:54 UTC

This is definitely going into my memories. And the fact that you wrote it based on the Mv is just freaking awesome. The world scared the shit out of me and when it rained it made me cry. I love it. Thank you for sharing ^^

morago March 20 2011, 13:25:21 UTC

I know this response is ridiculously late, but I just wanted to say thank you for reading and commenting! I have no idea where writing to the Soom MV came from - I think I was watching it for something else and then it just hit me. I'm ecstatic to hear that the world I created affected you, though, even while I'm sorry I caused tears.

Again, thank you. ♥

heavenlyjuliet January 18 2011, 13:37:41 UTC

This was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

There's really nothing else I can describe it...

morago March 20 2011, 13:26:18 UTC

I am responding so late, but just... thank you. So much. It means a lot that you read and commented, and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.

Breathe dreamer1219 January 18 2011, 14:31:09 UTC

This is futuristic drama fanfic.... Reminds me of Orwell's 1989, n Matrix.... And the characters are gorgeous beast members. Love this. Your writing is AWESOME.

Re: Breathe morago March 20 2011, 13:27:13 UTC

Late response is horribly late, but thank you so much for commenting! I'm glad you liked it. :)

volatileflame January 18 2011, 15:56:54 UTC

this was frickin' awesome and beautiful and ~ omg it was so good ♥

morago March 20 2011, 13:50:05 UTC

I am so late in replying, but thank you so much! I really appreciate your comment. :)

ext_396519 January 18 2011, 19:17:53 UTC

up til the part where yoseob and junhyung almost died, i was like -->

morago March 20 2011, 14:07:55 UTC

Ugh you took all that time to comment and I am so terribly late in responding, I'm so sorry!

And it's such an amazing comment, too, I just... thank you. As horrible as it sounds, it's amazing to hear that it had such an affect on you because that means I did my job, and that is the best compliment I could ever hope to hear. Thank you so much. ♥