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[morbid_soup]

Wow... I wrote something... Pretty bad, but I have been toying with the idea for a while, and not only as a writing peace. Called "Escape"

Comments

[aurelias_roses]

I think it's actually pretty good...
Except: superballs?

[emilyrose3292]

*grin*

[emilyrose3292]

let's apply freud to this, shall we?
sorry.
I just had to say that.

[martini2010]

I think it's good, too. As always, you make the rest of us envious of your talent that we wish we possesed...

[emilyrose3292]

wow...that's really good. I wish I had your talent...

[emilyrose3292]

oh, and some details could be improved, but NOTHING BY YOU IS BAD. OR CRAPPY. OR ANY OTHER PUTDOWNS YOU CAN THINK OF.

[aurelias_roses]

We tend to put ourselves down, especially when we ARE good writers, because what other people see (that we write) as good, we see merely as mediocre. Er. When I say "we". I mean writers in general. Not good writers specifically. But anyways. Alot of times, you mgiht consider something you write bad, because it's just not the very,very best you can do, but it's a bit of a bias. Because you might expect too much from yourself. Just leave it for a few days, and then reread it with an objective point of view. Um. I think I mean objective. Sometimes when you do that, you can figure out how to improve it. Don't just throw it away. Keep it to the side until one day you feel inspired, and take some time to edit until you think it's the best you can do.
But it's very good right now.
(you know, John tends to ramble/rant to other people. I never expected to rant to him. Or ramble. Whichever.)

[emilyrose3292]

John's defintion of 'rant' is a bit more violent than that...

[zeio_eunei]

hey, it's pretty good, but not as good as your others.
I dunno, do more emotion.
and....
superballs?
Do explain.

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[morbid_soup]

Super balls.
what I ahve inside my pants...
just kidding...
Im in a good mood...
Id like to ride it out...
Superballs are little rubber balls that you can bonce...
In the story he was a room without a ceiling, wo they all bonced out in the earthquake...
They simbolized his thoughts...

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[martini2010]

and you're always lecturing us about pervertedness...
oh yeah...I know what those are, those little bouncy balls you get in the quarter machines at resteraunts and grocery stores...

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[emilyrose3292]

I have some of those. Now I can literally say that I have someone by the balls. Won't that be entertaining.