Anouther random writing, writin on the spot

[morbid_soup]

The boy stared off into nothingness. Into the stars. His eyes mirrored the murky blackness of the space between. He was nothing. The sun rose. The boy stared into the day. Into the sun. Warmth spread into his eyes. Happiness lurked within his gaze. Then came sunset. Sadness and satisfaction plagued through his eyes, just before the

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[jeweleddragon]

Sounds cool. I can't say anything meaningful because I have to go, like, right now.

[life_question]

YAY!!! your first post in what is probably at least a month!!!
like Rose said, sounds cool. I do have time to say something meaningful, but I'm too lazy, and I'm momentarily brain dead, so I can't think of anything, but maybe I will later.

[aurelias_roses]

It reminds me of those that walked away from omelas, but not fr any good reason, except I just reread it.
It also reminds me of that drabble I wrote a while ago.
Kinda creepy, actually.In a deep way.

[zeio_eunei]

Sweet...
*sniff
Agh....
Why is it that I have fallen in love with the thing that curses me, makes me an exile? And I know she (NOT FROM MY POINT OF VIEW) can never love me back. The mirror of my thoughts, the shadow of my friends...who have died under my curse...I have fallen in love with the source of my sorrow.
This is my version of a part from "Lagrangian Points', when Remus is watching the moon.

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[morbid_soup]

It really isnt very good at all...
Infact, it downright sucks...
Be honest...

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[jeweleddragon]

Well, okay. But I trust you not to murder me for it! After all, you said to be honest!

Your style's almost a bit TOO choppy.

*runs away screaming bloody horror*

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[morbid_soup]

THANK YOU... First person to give a critical comment on something that I posted!!!

*grabs a axe, because it seems to be what you want me to do*

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[jeweleddragon]

Please let it be that smelly axe cologne, and not a murderous sort of axe...