LJ Idol - Write Off

[morettaallstar]

This is an entry for the therealljidol's Write Off. If you'd like to read any of the other entries added and vote for any of them, you can do so here. Voting will only be live until 2am UK time.

She looked like she had washed up on the shore, seaweed clinging to an ankle, shells in her tangled hair.
He found her drying out in the sun, naked, and promptly

Comments

[rayaso]

Together, of course. You made an excellent start, especially under the circumstances, and there are so many unanswered questions, such as can she return to being a mermaid, and what was she doing on the beach?

[morettaallstar]

Your comments always make my day, rayaso!

I'm very tempted to flesh this out, answer some of the questions I've left myself, gice Danny some answers too!

[murielle]

This is so much fun! I love the wonderful insights you bring to traditional fairy tales.

[morettaallstar]

Aww, thank you! :D

[kajel]

Oh my goodness, I love this!

[morettaallstar]

Thanks! I had fun with it. :)

[swirlsofblue]

Lovely, I especially liked the way you did the Ariel reveal through sign language.

[morettaallstar]

<3

[halfshellvenus]

Together would be nice, and certainly not running off after the scandalous boyfriend of someone else!

I liked that the K-k-k-k to help her end "Silk" caused her to imitate dolphin noises! I can see what that would immediately come to mind for her. :)

[morettaallstar]

I'm glad you liked it! I had a lot of fun with Silk and her way of thinking.