LJ Idol 11, Week 1: Resolution

[morettaallstar]

Because apparently I can’t write happy things :D

It was a Monday, he decided. Monday the first of the month. That's what he wrote down.

Comments

[i_love_freddie]

Very chilling.

[alexanderscttb]

Man, I really got into this. The style was so well ordered, methodical, almost to be hypnotic. . . perfectly setting up the reader for this brilliant, indeed, chilling conclusion. Top notch work--

[morettaallstar]

Thank you, that's really kind! I'm glad I managed to convey that atmosphere as intended!

[static_abyss]

You did so well in this entire entry. The way you conveyed that repetition and sealed it with a great ending. I feel for your protagonist.

[morettaallstar]

Thank you!

[roina_arwen]

Very well written and methodical. I like how you refer to the Madness as if it’s another character.

[morettaallstar]

Thank you!

[sweeny_todd]

Wow. This was... it was pretty terrifying. Partly because I can understand. The starting at the right time, the changing the days... I kinda get it.

awesome work!

[morettaallstar]

That means a lot! It's all depression and anxiety, but ratcheted all the way up.