Black Magic White Lies, chapter 1

Jun 01, 2009 13:41

Title: Black Magic White Lies
Author:moscow_watcher
Chapter 1 - In which Xander discovers a secret
Timeline: BtVS, alternate season 5
Genre: drama, mystery, action
Characters, pairing: general, Xander/Faith
Rating: R (for intense situations).
Summary: Xander thinks he has a little secret. He doesn't know that his little secret is a part of a big fat conspiracy ( Read more... )

bmwl, fanfic

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windandsummer June 1 2009, 19:33:02 UTC
Wait, any chance its Xander's baby? Thanks so much for sharing. This is rather good.~Bee

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moscow_watcher June 1 2009, 19:50:59 UTC
Wait, any chance its Xander's baby?

You'll find out in ch.16. :)

Thanks so much for sharing. This is rather good

Thank you for your feedback - I'm happy you like the story.

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angearia June 1 2009, 19:57:25 UTC
Oooo great start! I don't I've ever read a Faith-is-preggers fic. Can't wait for more. :)

Out of curiosity, what's your word count on your rough draft so far?

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moscow_watcher June 1 2009, 20:31:16 UTC
Oooo great start!

Thanks!

I don't I've ever read a Faith-is-preggers fic.

I hope it will turn out to be much more, thematically, than "Faith-is-preggers" story. Although, the temptation to make her weak and helpless and oh-so-in-need-of-a-manly-man-to-protect-her was overwhelming. But I resisted :)

Can't wait for more. :)

A chapter a week. Promise.

Out of curiosity, what's your word count on your rough draft so far?

32,000 words. 20 chapters.

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texican5x5 June 1 2009, 20:43:04 UTC
X/F! Really cool. I'm intrigued...more please.

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moscow_watcher June 1 2009, 20:49:14 UTC
Thank you! Yes, there will be more... soon.

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shapinglight June 2 2009, 11:50:12 UTC
Ah, interesting.

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moscow_watcher June 2 2009, 12:20:21 UTC
Thank you, Deb!
I appreciate your interest, given that it's not your pairing. I'm not sure I will be able to sustain it through the story - but I'll try. This fic is, besides other things, an experiment with different storytelling devices, at attempt at manipulating the audience, making people guess what is really happening...

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shapinglight June 2 2009, 17:37:50 UTC
Well, it's true I'm not terribly keen on Xander, but I like Faith, so I'll be carrying on.

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keith5by5 June 2 2009, 12:31:29 UTC
Very cool story, great start. Can't wait to see more.

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moscow_watcher June 2 2009, 12:39:22 UTC
Thank you! Yes, there will be more... a lot of things to come. :)

(love your avatar :)

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keith5by5 June 2 2009, 12:40:38 UTC
Heh. It's also my laptop's wallpaper. :D

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moscow_watcher June 2 2009, 12:57:57 UTC
Hee! I think such a wallpaper makes the word "laptop" sound a bit differently :)

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