[Fanfic] The Kid: Chapter 24/24

Jul 15, 2011 13:38

Title: The Kid 
Author/Artist: MoyaKite
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Prussia, Canada, Freddy (little!kid OC), America, and mentions of a bunch of others.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Character death, long chapter (3500~ words), angst, and bittersweet-ness.
Summary: Simply put, Prussia goes backpacking across Europe and finds a kid. What sort of a dad would ( Read more... )

c: america, c: oc, c: canada, c: romano, c: ensemble, chapterfic: the kid, c: prussia

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sweden_chan July 15 2011, 22:03:16 UTC
TT__________________TT Prussia!!

Please write extra scenes or what happened next sometime in the future! <3<3

I love this series, and thank you from the bottom of my heart that you wrote it *bows* <3

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moyakite July 15 2011, 22:14:34 UTC
Awww. Thank you, sweden_chan. I'm so glad that you loved this fic--and I'm so thankful that you took the time to comment on basically every chapter. <3 It's been nice talking to you in the comments. I appreciate everything you've said.

And I really, really want to write those scenes! But I'd probably just write disjointed moments that might've been scenes rather than a coherent sequel even if I did sit down to work on it--I'm just so busy.

What scenes would you most like to see?

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sweden_chan July 15 2011, 23:52:08 UTC
Of course I commented on every chapter! They're basically to awesome not to! And it's so fun that you take time and answer every post too~ <3

About scenes, I don't know =/ I really would like to know what happens with Romano and Freddy, if they get together and so. Otherwise, scenes with Prussia and Canada being cute or sexy~ Or.. arg, I just wanna read it all! It's hard to decide ;w;

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moyakite July 31 2011, 00:29:27 UTC
Awww. You're too kind.

Hmmmm. I think I'll post something for people to comment on with requests. It'll be a long time in coming if it comes at all, but it does sound like fun...

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kuriixcurry July 15 2011, 22:29:19 UTC
You don't know how much I'm sad right now. ;A;"
It all ends ... Here. Oh crap, it reminds me Harry Potter and I'm even more sad now. D:
But don't worry ! It's in the good way ! Sad in the good way, yeah. That chapter was so ... Heartbreaking, and cute, and beautiful, and sad, all mixed up. And despite Prussia's death, it gots a happy end, so I'm happy too. I don't know why, but I loved the part with Canada telling to his boss to do a Prussian Pride Parade. I don't know, it was just so epic. And then, seeing Prussia all awesome again enlightened my heart. His present ... Oh god, his present to Freddy ... ! It was so amazing, awesome, cute and all ! I think he did the best last present from him to his son. Hope they'll be forever happy. ;u;

Once again, thank you for all you've done, for that awesome fic, awesome chapter here and all ... ! It was really great to read, I don't regret it at all. x3
Thank you !

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moyakite July 31 2011, 00:30:48 UTC
Thank YOU for commenting! Without your support, I might have abandoned the project ages ago. Thanks for sticking with me for so long. Your long comments were always a treat. <3

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schwubdiwuppxd July 15 2011, 23:09:20 UTC
;_;....Oh my god why?

I can't believe that's the end....It's just....Noooo! Prussia! And poor Freddy and Canada and West!

That was one of the most awesome fictions I've ever read...Thank you for this wonderful story.(Good luck with reading all those journals Freddy....there are a lot and some might be in Latin or other languages....)

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moyakite July 31 2011, 00:32:51 UTC
And not the more recent versions of those languages, either--ancient languages. It's a wonder that he managed to preserve it all. I wonder who'll take on the duty of translating it... West, I bet.

Thank you for commenting!

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fullxmetalxgir July 15 2011, 23:34:28 UTC
It's over? It's over......

D,: It's over.

Strangely, I was fine until the childhood in his backpack line. Then I kinda choked up.

Thanks for the great fic! I doff my hat to you.

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moyakite July 31 2011, 00:35:10 UTC
Thank YOU for commenting! It was so nice to see that I developed a little group of regular commenters. You guys were/are great.

And that line seems to have hit everyone a little harder than I anticipated; I thought it was the sort of thing that would be ignored by most people, even though it makes me feel a little breathless. ...That's not the right word. Hmmmm. Well, I hope you know what I mean, anyway. Thank you again for sticking with me!

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seileach67 July 16 2011, 03:21:58 UTC
This made me tear up in the good way. I love that Canada got the brainwave of holding a Prussian Pride parade to help Gilbert hang on for long enough, and that Freddy now has not only all those records of his own childhood, but also *Prussia's* journals! Priceless in more ways than one. :)
Great job! <3

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moyakite July 31 2011, 00:36:22 UTC
Awww, thank you! Your comment means a lot to me. I'm not sure whether I should apologize for making you tear up, though? Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting!

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