Left Regardless

Dec 22, 2003 10:44

You are woman, felt less by my attention, and when it strays, I feel you drown in thought. I have loved, will love, do know that you love, and we love together, when we are temporary and living here. Attached by the hip, stopped by gazing, your essence is my interest.

My love cannot rescue you. I saw you sleeping at your funeral.

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talula_talula February 1 2004, 09:43:18 UTC
What a beautiful lace of words :) Sounds like a poetry to me. I'm not a native speaker of English, but I like this post very much. Very sad post, but beautiful...

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Re: mr_santa_claus February 1 2004, 14:12:16 UTC
You are so kind. I tear up a bit when reading this one myself.

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Interesting punk_is_pink February 2 2004, 10:02:01 UTC
Very beautiful poem? but sad and a bit disturbing, just because they make some kind of sense in me? yes im weird, but hey Good one.

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brightnovafaeri February 2 2004, 19:52:10 UTC
i really really really enjoyed that... i can relate in many ways...

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scarletclara February 9 2004, 06:38:57 UTC
Such a morbid thought. I have in past, loved most deeply even through multiple betrayals and beyond the point it was no longer mutual. I have released them, as much as my heart would allow, without breaking my entire being. I watch their journeys, with some limitation and know the distance is to far for me to intervene on their behalves (should they need me).

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ryknette February 26 2004, 03:51:30 UTC
Ah like it! ;]

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