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Dec 04, 2004 18:55

The music flows in my mind... so gentle.
It ressonates within.
The waves... so powerful,
The world cannot grasp their true motif.
But I enjoy their brilliance,
and I mourn them in their passing,
yet to create more beauty,
to the souls they reach next.

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letthedreamfade December 5 2004, 01:00:09 UTC
elegance, intelligent, powerful and moving. This literary piece is a true portrayal of our generations struggles, joys, and pains. I commend you, Ryan, for making this masterpiece of a poem and letting the world hear your poetic genius.

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oy! mrfuckmaster December 5 2004, 20:05:10 UTC
id like to see you one up me senor Ocampo

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