Part II

Apr 12, 2006 22:04

Second installment!

Ginny arrives, Ron is testing, and an unexpected visitor shocks the group.

More thanks to alliekiwi and alexia75 for their beta help and ideas.

PART II )

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ionaonie April 12 2006, 22:35:58 UTC
Lorna, that was amazing.

That Ron and Hermoine kiss was perfect. I loved both of their reactions. And Hermione's mention of Miss Brown was hilarious.

Draco's entrance. Dear god, what can I say? It was magnificent. It greatly amused me how he flirted with both Ginny and Harry. It was perfect, just how I'd imagine Draco to be.

And Snape in the next bit. Fantastic.

I'm loving this completely.

Bring on the next part.

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mrs_knightley April 13 2006, 00:27:17 UTC
And I'm loving you completely for your lovely praise!

The kiss was the very very last thing I wrote. Really, I had their reactions to it weeks ago. I avoided it for ages. But it's quite a formula... insert swaying here, trail kisses down neck here...

Draco is a big Regency man-whore. Animal, vegetable, mineral... he'll do anything to anything. (Love Blackadder!)

QUESTION to you and also anyone else... where does one pimp something that is on a live journal? Is there somewhere I can post a link and say 'all you who like bodice rippers come here?'

I'm feeling whorish and want to put my fic about.

x x x x

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themolesmother April 13 2006, 07:14:46 UTC
This is great fun! You livened up my morning no end :-).

Looking forward very much to Childermass!Snape. If you want any backgroundy stuff from Jonathan Strange and Mr Norrell as to Childermass's character, etc I've just finished re-reading it and would be glad to help.

Keep going. I really want to read the next instalment.

MM

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mrs_knightley April 14 2006, 13:01:39 UTC
Thank you!

I'm going to have a look at the book later on to see if insipration hits me. I'm finding him fairly daunting to write so I hope that helps. Thanks for the offer!

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anonymous April 15 2006, 21:46:23 UTC
This is awesome!! You've got everyone in character perfectly, I can't wait until Snape enters. And poor Ginny! Meeting a Draco like that would scare the hell out of me too! Great kiss too, I'm loving every moment of this. Thank you for sharing! :D

Beth x

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mrs_knightley April 16 2006, 23:17:23 UTC
Thanks very much! I did wonder who you were, then I saw you had posted on Britishisms.

Draco will clearly be bothering Ginny for a while! :)

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fadedbluejeans April 15 2006, 23:33:43 UTC
I've just read both parts of this, and it was wonderful. The kiss was brilliant (which is saying something, because I usually hate R/Hr), and I love Draco's character. But then I suppose we all knew that he was really a Regency man-whore in disguise...

I'd love to offer some constructive criticism here, but it's just so wonderfully funny.

-Cassi, who can't decide whether she prefers Draco flirting with Ginny or Draco flirting with Harry...*sigh*

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mrs_knightley April 16 2006, 23:20:08 UTC
Thank you... did you get here from FA?

R/Hr might not be everyone's cup of tea, but they make a great sparky, will-they-won't-they regency couple.

Glad you like it, and don't worry, I hope to put a lot of flirting in on both counts!

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fadedbluejeans April 17 2006, 22:45:21 UTC
Yeah, I'm an FA girl.

*grins widely at the thought of getting to see her two favourite Draco pairings in one awesomely unusual fic*
-Cassi

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Enchanted Teakettle, Reviewing with style! (not!) anonymous April 16 2006, 15:15:16 UTC
Oh, this was such a lovely chapter!(Actually, more accurately, lovely chapters, but I'll just count it as one in this review, if that's okay!) I really, really enjoyed it ( ... )

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Re: Enchanted Teakettle, Reviewing with style! (not!) mrs_knightley April 16 2006, 23:24:24 UTC
Aww, honestly, thank you for the long review!

I had hoped to get everyone canon. Human nature trancends wizarding/historical boundries obviously!

Draco will flirt with anyone. Let's hope he is not out to ruin little Ginny's character...

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