Going Left Around the World: Chapter 48

Nov 15, 2011 21:56

Arial">Disclaimer:  Brokeback Mountain and the original characters of Jack and Ennis were created by and belong to Annie Proulx. No money is being made from this- I’m just taking them out for a spin!

mso-bidi-font-family:Arial">Summary: This is an au/au story told in the first person from Jack’s POV. Jack and Ennis both come from working-class ( Read more... )

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camillar November 16 2011, 03:40:16 UTC
Aww! Thanks! I'm only super brave and tough cuz I have a super awesome girlfriend taking care of me! I love you!!! Oh, and I love your story too! :)

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Pain joetheone November 16 2011, 04:14:56 UTC
The unspoken thoughts of the ones we love and hold dear can tear us apart and not expressing or talking out our feelings can make it worse. Yes, being young and even old we all do this at times. When such life changing things like this come up it is very difficult to endure. I know that long distance relationships are also very hard and I also know that by going Ennis is giving up something he loves, but he is also taking an opportunity to see if this is what he really wants. I think he really wants Jack but he also is still unsure of it all. College is such a time of exploration and exploring ones sexuality and relationships. For some it is very difficult and finding a path to take is also very hard. I feel for both of them but as they say if it is mean to be it will be. Although to the road to get to this place of happiness forever can be quite painful. Joe

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annabuffy November 16 2011, 04:58:34 UTC
Love this story, thank you for the update. I must also thank you for the few comments from present time Jack indicating that he and Ennis are on good terms and speaking to each other. Feel bad for Jack though, after losing his mom, now he's losing his boyfriend. Looking forward to reading more.

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eandj November 16 2011, 06:12:19 UTC
If only they could talk about it some.
They could find a way for a long distance relationship but for this they should talk about their emotions and that's not so easy isn't it?
thank you for this chapter, I'm looking forward to more like always
Paula

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roby100 November 16 2011, 08:16:32 UTC
I still love your writing.
I still love your story, even if it hurts in this moment.
I still like Josh a lot, the best friend for Jack, the only person I didn't mind to see with Jack when Ennis was giving him a hard time. If I accepted Jack with somebody else it really means that your writing is good!

Thanks for keeping writing this story and for the promise of Golden Boy.
I'm so happy you and Camilla are taking care of each other. Love is a precious thing.

A big hug
Roby

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