Going Left Around the World: Chapter 52

Jan 15, 2013 22:08

"Times New Roman"">Disclaimer:  Brokeback Mountain and the original characters of Jack and Ennis were created by and belong to Annie Proulx. No money is being made from this- I’m just taking them out for a spin!

Summary: This is an au/au story told in the first person from Jack’s POV. Jack and Ennis both come from working-class families and bond as ( Read more... )

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argentine65 January 17 2013, 13:33:09 UTC
I am still here and I will be during all the time I will have to wait, because I love this story and you are a wonderful writer. Thank you for share. Martha

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trekfan January 17 2013, 19:12:25 UTC
wow I was surprised to see this posted. Happy in a good way. Will these two guys ever get on the same page? I know Jack is so in love with Ennis but how can he trust him? And will Ennis ever admit to what he feels about Jack

please don't wait too long to post again. I await your next update

thanks Jill,

and best of luck to you and Camilla, much wedded bliss is wished for you both <3

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turtle_2806 January 20 2013, 17:04:03 UTC
I just "found" your story a few days ago. Couldn't stop to read. Thanks for the new update. I am waiting patiently for more to come.
Thank you for sharing this intense story.
Christina

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lomoroto January 23 2013, 01:31:38 UTC
Was wondering where these guys went! Appreciate your updating and awaiting more, whenever they whisper in your ear.

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freetraveller15 January 23 2013, 18:44:24 UTC
First of all, congratulations and best wishes to you and Camilla!
Thanks for sticking with this story. I was hoping for an update in the new year, and here it comes.
I pretty much confirm what I'd been saying in previous comments to this story, that I very much admire your realism, in the dialogue and character reactions, which is probably more difficult to achieve when a story is told entirely from one character's POV only.
Ennis and Jack in this story have such a complex, flawed relationship, and yet you know they're each other's soulmates, in a way Jack and Josh are not, though I love the fact that Jack can count on such a great guy as a friend, and maybe more, in tough times. At the same time, I love the fact that Jack has such respect and loyalty for Josh that he doesn't want to use him to get back at Ennis, no matter how tempting it would be.
Great stuff.
Thank you.
All the best.
Paola

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