Going Left Around the World: Chapter 54

[mrs_spamlad]

Disclaimer: Brokeback Mountain and the original characters of Jack and Ennis were created by and belong to Annie Proulx. No money is being made from this- I’m just taking them out for a spin!

Summary: This is an au/au story told in the first person from Jack’s POV. Jack and Ennis both come from working-class families and bond as the outcast poor

Comments

[grlewis]

cute response between jack and josh after the shower. too bad jack got all spazzy. he needs to get away from ennis before ennis screws him over royally. but i guess this really is too soon for jack even though ennis is already being inconsiderate. he could have left a message for jack before he went out. that way jack wouldn't have spent the whole night worried. i guess this is going to get even more painful for jack before things get better.

So good

[joetheone]

Well, the time slipping by and Ennis finding himself. I hope at a later date he finds his way back to Jack. However, right now he needs to find out who he is and finally accept himself. For Jack well, a little fun on the side while waiting won't kill you but with Josh it could be dangerous because it would not just be sex between friends he likes you too much Jack. Yeah it is so difficult finding our way in the world and seeing this evolve is wonderful. Joe

[eandj]

it just would have be too soon. When Enis and Jack are driting further apart- and this is coming, no doubt about it- he will need to think about other men. But I think he needs Josh more as a friend- I hope everything will be all right with these two
Paula

[roby100]

Happy dance for the new chapter!
I loved it.

It’s just dinner. It’ll be fun - no big deal. Right?
We will see. Hope the lovely author will let us know really soon :)

A big hug
Roby

[dreamy40]

Thrilled to see a new chapter. Not so thrilled to see E slipping away - short conversations, its ok if he doesn't call every day...Feel sorry as hell for Jack.

Am reasonably sure this dinner will be a big deal. Hope to find out v v soon.

Thanks lots x