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mrs_spamlad

Going Left Around the World: Chapter 73

Dec 30, 2016 22:18

Title: Going Left Around the World

Author: mrs-spamlad

Pairing: Jack/Ennis

Rating: R

Feedback: have at it!

Disclaimer: Brokeback Mountain and the original characters of Jack and Ennis were created by and belong to Annie Proulx. No money is being made from this- I’m just taking them out for a spin!

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Comments 22

grlewis January 1 2017, 03:59:48 UTC

i loved the discussions of the boys with each other. i found myself tearing up. this is just so tender now.

mrs_spamlad January 5 2017, 05:14:06 UTC

Thank you so much for saying that. It means a lot to know writing has touched on a real emotion for a reader. Thanks for sticking with this story for so long!
jill

roby100 January 1 2017, 14:37:50 UTC

So good to start the new year with a new chapter! Thanks so much for it.
A great chapter with a bit of necessary sadness. We know Jack had a tough time, talking about it was the right thing to do. Very well written.

Happy New Year to my favorite golden girls!
Hugs
Roby

mrs_spamlad January 5 2017, 05:16:38 UTC

Happy New Year from our home to yours, Roby! I'm glad this little story could be part of your New Year- thanks for reading all this time!

jill

argentine65 January 3 2017, 16:55:22 UTC

Ten years is a lot, so many things happened and noe before being together there are things that have to be told and understand. Thank you very much, I really love this story. Have a Happy New year for you and yours. Martha

mrs_spamlad January 5 2017, 05:17:37 UTC

Thanks so much, Martha! A Happy New Year to you as well!

jill

freetraveller15 January 4 2017, 05:15:53 UTC

I was hoping you'd post a new chapter over the holidays, so thank you so much! It was tough to hear what Ennis had to say to Jack about his conversation with Jack's mum and how Ennis inevitably had carried around this guilt for so many years. I love how they are both handling this mutual 're-acquaintance', with honesty and caution in equal measure; and look forward to reading how they'll progress from here, though I'll be very sad to see this story end.
Thank you! Happy 2017!

freetraveller15 January 4 2017, 10:48:56 UTC

mrs_spamlad January 5 2017, 05:22:09 UTC

Happy 2017 to you as well, Paola! I, too, will be sad to see these two boys (well, men now) go. They've been my characters for so long, it will be strange not to think about what comes next for them. The best I can do is end the story well, and I leave that up to the judgement of the readers once the last two chapters are posted.

Thank you as always for your thoughtful comments. :)

jill