LJ Idol Season 10, Week 17

[mrstotten]

“It’s not right

Comments

[bleodswean]

I really enjoyed this! I liked the juxtaposition and how happiness was the end result of being brave enough to make a change.

[i_17bingo]

I was feeling just how frustrated Martin and the real estate agents must have been--you illustrated that perfectly in the text. And I think that's why it was so satisfying for him to find a better match in both (nameless) partner and house.

[rayaso]

"The houses hadn’t been right, because they hadn’t been right." This was such an apt, but appropriate realization. It wasn't just "location location location," but "person person person. I loved the idea in this!

[beeker121]

I liked this. The realization that the person you live with is as important as where was a great turn for the piece, and you sketched in both the early frustration and the later contentment well.

[shadowwolf13]

This gives me warm fuzzies. :)