LJ Idol Season 10, Week 17

[mrstotten]

“It’s not right

Comments

[eternal_ot]

Ah! You worked wonders with both the prompts. This indeed was a nice story. I love what you did here. Good job!

[ryl]

Nothing like house-hunting to test a relationship. I'm glad they were able to figure out the real problem before they ended up with a shared mortgage and that everything worked out!

[halfshellvenus]

Every penny of their deposit was coming from his savings.
SUCH a bad sign.

I think the real problem there was Sarah, and I'm glad Martin moved on and found his perfect match. :)

Oh-- I didn't see any mention of your Intersection partner here. Who was it?

[mrstotten]

I didn't have one ☹️ They had to drop out at the last minute

Really glad you enjoyed it

[halfshellvenus]

Oh boy, that's alarming! I'm glad you survived the voting-- that must have been especially nervewracking.

My second-ever Intersection partner and I connected one time, where she got the gist of my idea, and then she fell off the planet. Wouldn't respond to emails before or after the deadline. She did post her story, which was so loosely intersected that I thought people would punish us for that... and didn't respond to any comments on her entry. I was thisClose to going out that week. Ugh.

[murielle]

Excellent use of both prompts! Brava!

[dmousey]

This is sweet, but not treacle sweet. The internalizations were lovely and who didn't cheer when he and Sarah broke it off. I'm glad you gave this a happy ending! Hugs and peace~~~