This is not a small cut that scabs, and dries, and flakes, and heals.

Nov 03, 2004 22:21


these simple songs, like those tiny lullabies i was once given, will cry for me when my eyes have not a tear left.

and those remarkable words i had yet to hear..

became a part of me long before they were glued to that glorious melody..

{i swear a stereo can turn your life around.}

our heartbeats are inseparable.

it's these tiny moments i spend ( Read more... )

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how long will it heal? anonymous November 4 2004, 19:27:53 UTC
just reading the first words i can feel the emotions. i think i know how you feel.....how I feel on MY side, its a feeling of guilt.its how i feel. so many things are happening in my life. its like these walls that are built around me. do they have to stalk me? do they have to be up? im afraid they do. it doesnt feel good being on this side. its no good. its uncomfortable to breath. so i push back the walls to get only a second of air. and when im out will i hurt people? i think i will. i think i hurt you. and if i did im sorry. then i walls rush back and im back in the walls. its a trap. either way i will suffer ( ... )

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Re: how long will it heal? ender_williams November 6 2004, 13:42:04 UTC
ted...ted who, i dont know any other teds.

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Re: how long will it heal? ender_williams November 6 2004, 13:43:07 UTC
p.s. your words are beautiful

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this is the way it is. beneath_surface November 4 2004, 21:10:25 UTC
the closing remarks finish your masterpiece. my heart skips a beat, gathering myself.. i shatter teardrops all because for that girl, you see, she will never know of this. of your emotion. of her emotion. and she doesnt have to. she just doesnt have to.. your pink outline defines her so well. "he is the lamb, she is the slaughter". and thats life as we may know it.

youre beauty glows and everyone sees it. and like ted, i appreciate your friendship ever so sweetly. a gift you are, i am blessed. thank you erin, i love you.

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Re: this is the way it is. armsofautomtion November 7 2004, 16:14:45 UTC
teh

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Re: this is the way it is. armsofautomtion November 7 2004, 18:39:55 UTC
And When They Find Her On The Shore, They'll Say.

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falltopieces13 November 7 2004, 13:05:19 UTC
amazing...

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beautiful! justmebarig November 8 2004, 17:21:22 UTC
hey Erin!

Your journal is wonderful. I love your writing, and the way you piece words together. I feel as if I know exactly what your taking about, like I can see myself in your words.

You are the best!

-Bari

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Re: beautiful! wu___ November 12 2004, 17:47:33 UTC
it was nice meeting you in nuance

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