'and we will wait for eachother. we will..'

Feb 21, 2005 10:39


a screeching showerhead..
a cloudy room that smells like a dream..
i am a guest in this house..
but it feels like home.

and as i near his room..
beer bottles line the hallway..
with memories trapped inside them.

my heart and i gather outside his door like anxious children..
oh but i am a woman..
seeking a man.

his clothes are folded and shoved securely in ( Read more... )

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timboogeyman February 21 2005, 09:50:48 UTC
i'll wait a life time, if one day, she can call me her own....

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anonymous February 22 2005, 12:19:13 UTC
I admire you and your poems.

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mselektrikocean February 22 2005, 20:15:59 UTC
thank you, that means a lot to me.

who are you?

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teamsleep1705 February 24 2005, 19:08:00 UTC
i would have to agree. erin i think ...no
i know that a lot of people,including me
admire you and your poems.
you are truly a person to look up to.
your words echoing throughout our mind.
words from an intelligent, carrying, loving person.
keep it up.

"Through the air and time
We came to see her
Where the sun collides
She carried us all"

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anonymous March 7 2005, 19:58:48 UTC
who is that a picture of dearest?

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symbolism. mselektrikocean March 7 2005, 21:31:25 UTC
whoever you want it to be.

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anonymous March 10 2005, 07:53:54 UTC
was it origionally taken of you?

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mselektrikocean March 10 2005, 16:11:40 UTC
no it wasn't. who is this?

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anonymous March 12 2005, 22:53:26 UTC
esperanza woods.

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