Comments | mspoisonapple: i wrote a song..wo0t!

mspoisonapple

i wrote a song..wo0t!

Feb 20, 2005 17:17

so, i got really bored/inspirde by watching the rain and so you better not laugh at me... and yeah. please feel free to critize me tho...no laughing tho

( The day i fell for the rain )

Comments 10

post_no_bills February 21 2005, 02:51:07 UTC

i likey. esp the first and third stanza. its very purdy.

your icon made me happy today

mspoisonapple February 21 2005, 03:08:51 UTC

it my doggie (not my ACTAUAL dog)...reminded me of cathy.

wat're stanzas?

im glad u like them...watever they are.

splendiferousness... a_chained_soul February 21 2005, 03:56:32 UTC

that's amazing...i like it a lot! can i steal it an put it in my room? i want to please, please, please??? oh, btw...stanza's are like paragraphs in poetry, or in songs also known as a verse. either way, it's beautiful, and it makes me think of my girlfriend...you're very talented!!!

Re: splendiferousness... mspoisonapple February 21 2005, 21:44:15 UTC

yes yes u can have it...oh stanzaz make snese now thanks. aww it make u think of ur girlfirend...imflattered i hope she likes it too..

yeah go ahead and take it! its all good.

lindsaysayso February 21 2005, 04:21:45 UTC

that makes me sad cuz its very good. ill explain later. its awesome.

mspoisonapple February 21 2005, 21:42:10 UTC

thanks u...ur very odd but thanks you.

sherison February 21 2005, 19:55:28 UTC

I like it too! I like the repitition and the personification is reeeally good :)

mspoisonapple February 21 2005, 21:47:13 UTC

ooo. big word person-o-fiction! whee! im glad u liked it, it was hard to rite the ending and stuff but i think it came out good.

gracias pretty lady

the_capn_jack February 22 2005, 19:59:25 UTC

it gave me the tinglies in the back of my neck! Good stuff!

mspoisonapple February 23 2005, 00:04:12 UTC

ohh tinglies are good! (:mumble: even tho it could jus be the weather lol :mumble:) im glad u like it.. im beginin to like it a lot more now.

im so odd.

lurve u!