LJI S9.4, “Nobody can ride your back if your back's not bent"

[muchtooarrogant]

Dan was exiting the shower when he heard the suspicious noise from the bedroom

Comments

[swirlsofblue]

Sweet :)

[muchtooarrogant]

Thank you!

Dan

[shay_writes]

I like the ones with caramel. :)

I enjoyed this bit of fiction.

[muchtooarrogant]

Yup, caramel ones are good, but crisps are better! *grin*

Thanks for reading, and glad you liked it.

Dan

[muchtooarrogant]

Games are what keep a marriage interesting.

I'm usually a big fan of the clever twist, but this week I felt like writing something straight forward and fun.

Glad you enjoyed, and thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Dan

[basric]

I enjoyed how you used the prompt. It was light-hearted and fun.

[muchtooarrogant]

Thanks for reading and commenting, and I'm glad you enjoyed my little piece of fiction.

Dan

[bleodswean]

I enjoyed the verbal sparring. It's difficult to write a dialogue game of this nature and you did a great job!

[muchtooarrogant]

Thank you, that's high praise. Dialogue is one of my favorite things to write, and I'm glad you enjoyed what I did with it here.

Dan