LJI S9.4, “Nobody can ride your back if your back's not bent"

Apr 04, 2014 09:26

Dan was exiting the shower when he heard the suspicious noise from the bedroom ( Read more... )

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similiesslip April 5 2014, 03:48:02 UTC
I love this. The light-hearted way you wrote it and the dialogue are amazing! :)

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muchtooarrogant April 6 2014, 14:35:37 UTC
Thank you! I wasn't sure how well it'd turn out when I first started writing, but once I got to the first quote of the "quote off," I was having too much fun to stop. *grin*

Dan

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zhent April 5 2014, 04:19:38 UTC
I like this. A nice lighthearted take!

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muchtooarrogant April 6 2014, 14:36:34 UTC
Thank you!

Dan

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roina_arwen April 5 2014, 04:52:06 UTC
This was a sweet entry. For what it's worth, I prefer the peanut butter filled chocolate bars.

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muchtooarrogant April 6 2014, 14:37:52 UTC
Ah yes, peanut butter is also one of my favorites. :) Thanks for reading and commenting.

Dan

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eternal_ot April 5 2014, 05:03:59 UTC
I was playing with this idea..but couldn't have done half as good as you!..loved it..the "who gets the last piece " kept me hooked...;) a cute story..:)

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muchtooarrogant April 6 2014, 14:40:52 UTC
Thank you! I love quotes, and just researching this and deciding which goofy quotes to use was a lot of fun. I hope you go with this idea, just so I can read your work and discover even more fun quotes. :)

Thanks for reading.

Dan

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eternal_ot April 7 2014, 05:13:56 UTC
Haha..i myself am quite a "Quote collector" ...goodreads would validate...came up with something else this time..but you'll surely see quotes in my writing/pictures i share..:)

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kagomeshuko April 5 2014, 05:16:32 UTC
i want to have quote-off with somebody, but I want it to be a literature quote off!

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muchtooarrogant April 6 2014, 14:44:47 UTC
Yes, that would be great fun! Just as fun though, imagine if you got to pick whom to have the quote off with... Like Neil Gaiman, he'd slay you, but it'd be so cool playing with him. :)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Dan

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