Comments | mullvaney: Bridget's Fame, March week three entry

mullvaney

Bridget's Fame, March week three entry

Mar 22, 2009 08:25

this is an eleventh-hour idea; I haven't had time to fully develop it, or, well, even run a spell check. Horrifying errors of grammer may be contained herin ;-D

( The Night Horses )

Comments 11

nebula_sprout March 22 2009, 20:42:22 UTC

I like how the meaning behind the horses is slow to appear, starting as first just a nagging at the back of your mind, until finally you know exactly what it is. Well written! Good luck this week!

mullvaney March 22 2009, 21:43:21 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you like it!

cedarwolfsinger March 23 2009, 00:33:47 UTC

This was wonderful! I love your images of the horses, and Tess' strength fading away slowly. Good luck with this!

mullvaney March 23 2009, 14:52:16 UTC

Thank you, good luck to you too!

desert_rose March 23 2009, 08:10:06 UTC

Wow!

I really love this piece! I love reading stories involving horses. You kept me captivated right the way through!

Good luck this week!

mullvaney March 23 2009, 14:53:08 UTC

Wow, thanks, I'm so glad you like it!

Edit harlotbug3 March 24 2009, 16:27:25 UTC

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Re: Edit mullvaney March 24 2009, 16:47:49 UTC

Thank you for the edit (I use a similar line-by-line style, so no problems there)! I want to work this over for publication, and your comments will be invaluable. Also, I'm smacking myself in the head for the comma-splices . . .

Week four's topic! desert_rose March 28 2009, 02:28:21 UTC

Hi there,

Just a friendly reminder that there's just under 36 hours to get your week four entry in, if you're still able to participate. The deadline is 10am, Sunday March 29.

While I'm here, I'm going to reread your entry since I like it so much!

Congratulations for winning week 3, awesome effort!