FIC: Battle Hymn of the Republic (NC-17, McKay/Sheppard)

[munchkinott]

Title: Battle Hymn of the Republic
Author: Munchie (munchkinott)
Type: Slash
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay

Archive: my LJ, JAM's Padded Cell and Wraithbait
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Disclaimer: Still Stargate: Atlantis. Still not owning any of this. Still not making any money out of it

Comments

w007 . . .

[custardpringle]

That was SO worth the wait. Very glad that I finally got to read it.

Crap . . . now that's gonna follow me to Japanese class. With Phil. *frustrated sob*

Re: w007 . . .

[munchkinott]

That was SO worth the wait. Very glad that I finally got to read it.

Ta & thanks & ta. :-D *hugs* Though you do know I was working on another bunny 'til thursday night? *gulp*

Crap . . . now that's gonna follow me to Japanese class. With Phil. *frustrated sob*

Ouch. Sorry. Just don't look at any trees with lustful intent... stick to the gym equip. *nods*

[thegrrrl2002]

OMG, I love you so. This is fabulous. I love the way you use words, it's all so fresh and new and naughty. And you know, usually shifting POVs annoys me, but it really worked here, because their thoughts were so hysterical and perfectly matched, point and counterpoint.

Why did McKay have to look this hot when he was about to kill someone?

Why did that someone always have to be him?

Why did he really get off on that?!

Sheppard is so gone, McKay's got him all wrapped up, and that is so damn sweet.

But this bit of characterization just slayed me:

"I'm goin' for a walk. Check things out," Sheppard had drawled to Ford - Ford whose finger, with good reason, hadn't left the trigger of his 9mm. "McKay, you're with me." Sheppard tugged down the front of his vest and jacket for no reason, worked some imagined crick out of his neck and turned towards the door.Oh god, that's so wonderful. Such a tough guy. And then McKay bursts his bubble. They are *so* made for each other

Wow... *gobsmacked*

[munchkinott]

OMG, I love you so. This is fabulous.

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. *HUGE blush*

I love the way you use words, it's all so fresh and new and naughty. And you know, usually shifting POVs annoys me, but it really worked here, because their thoughts were so hysterical and perfectly matched, point and counterpoint.

*blushage increase* I'm always on the lookout for new and interesting ways to abuse the English language. :-) POV's in my stuff switch around a lot, I can't write in one direction when there's a 360 degree, 3 dimensional perspective going off in my head. *sheepish grin* It's strange you should mention the point and counterpoint because while I was going over Al's beta this afternoon I was thinking 'how the hell did I do this? it's a Newton's Cradle in text format!'

Sheppard is so gone, McKay's got him all wrapped up, and that is so damn sweet.

Very gone. :-D And very bored because Weir won't let him do what he wants to. :-) Very full of mischief. :-D And very, very stuck on McKay. :-D *pets Sheppard!muse*

Oh god

Re: Wow... *gobsmacked*

[thegrrrl2002]

You're very welcome! And yes, it's always best when shared. Shared porn. Really, it makes the world go 'round. At least in my universe. And you know me, I'm all about the self-indulgent nekkid!pretty!boy porn. *g*

Re: Wow... *gobsmacked*

[munchkinott]

You're very welcome! And yes, it's always best when shared. Shared porn. Really, it makes the world go 'round. At least in my universe. And you know me, I'm all about the self-indulgent nekkid!pretty!boy porn. *g*

Ta. *sheepish grin* And so are you 'cause... PORNSHARE! (it's like a Timeshare only stickier and more knackering. ;-)) Promise, any more filthy mental images get into my brain in a conducive plot-ish style, will definitely share. *salutes* Especially if they're of the self-indulgent nekkid!pretty!boy variety.

Which they will most probably be, more than likely, knowing me... I'm annoyingly consistent in that respect. ;-)

[probodie]

I absolutely adored this! Hot, outdoor sex, hot irritated men, hot lusting men. Gorgeous!

[munchkinott]

Am really very, very happy that you liked it. :-D

Many painstaking hours of watching DH get nekkid research went into it. ¬.¬

THANK YOU! :-D

[reedfem]

Okay, that's it! I'm sending you money or something.

I loved this. Your mind is just such a wild & wooly place, I'm very happy you're able to get some semblance of it on (virtual) paper for the rest of us to enjoy as well.

I can't even bring myself to quote something back at you because I'd be quoting the whole thing. I love all the little extraneous bits you slip in, which turn out not to be so extraneous after all.

And the porn was terrific too.

::starts building your monument next to Grrrl's::

Wowee, Tis Praise Indeed

[munchkinott]

Okay, that's it! I'm sending you money or something.

Send me... DH. Nekkid. With a jar of morello cherries in kirsch. *eg*

I do accept all major shrubberies too. ;-)

I loved this. Your mind is just such a wild & wooly place, I'm very happy you're able to get some semblance of it on (virtual) paper for the rest of us to enjoy as well.

I take it it was worth the wind up? ;-) My mind is a very strange place to be. It is a beautifully cinematographed landscape of potentially pornish scenarios, nekkid men and really AWFUL jokes. :-D Thank god for Al, 'cause the unbetaed version of anything out of my head is practically illegible. It's like the DaVinci Code only really, really - liek - DUMB!

I can't even bring myself to quote something back at you because I'd be quoting the whole thing. I love all the little extraneous bits you slip in, which turn out not to be so extraneous after all.

... Can I be gobsmacked now? :-D *is gobsmacked*

And the porn was terrific too.Well... *shuffles feet* I really did NEED the porn. Y'know,

Damn me! I forgot to tell you how much I liked this!

[maching_monkey]

A terrible oversight on my part, especially as you'd gone to the trouble of e-mailing it to me! Please accept my apologies.

And my WHOOT!, of course. This was awesome.

And fucking hilarous, of course. My favourite paragraph:

Of course McKay's plan had fallen apart the second they'd set remolecularised foot over the event horizon. Sheppard had wanted to make the first gesture of greeting to the locals. So Teyla had thoughtfully kicked him in the back of the knee and stepped forward to meet the welcome party.

After watching "Hot Zone" (double whoot!), I can so see it happening I was just giggling like an idiot. And then Sheppard gets regulated to a milk stool in the back of the room... Hee hee hee hee hee.

Of course, Elizabelth with her Whiteboard of Doom(tm) was a fabulous touch as well. So freaking hilarious

Don't worry about it! :-D As long as you liked it, I'm happy! :-D

[munchkinott]

A terrible oversight on my part, especially as you'd gone to the trouble of e-mailing it to me! Please accept my apologies.

None necessary, honest! *hugs* Well at least you know what my stuff looks like now BEFORE Al gets hold of it... *shudders* I'm BAD without having my grammar wrangled properly.

And my WHOOT!, of course. This was awesome.

*BLINK* Really? *nervous gulp* Should I go hide under my desk again? 'Cause I'm REALLY out of practice on PWPs... *huge gulp*

And fucking hilarous, of course. My favourite paragraph:

After watching "Hot Zone" (double whoot!), I can so see it happening I was just giggling like an idiot. And then Sheppard gets regulated to a milk stool in the back of the room... Hee hee hee hee hee.

I'm starting to get worried about my fic... It's going canon at an alarming rate. :-D That para made it in for you, actually, reckoned you'd appreciate it. ;-) Sheppard had to be relegated, really, his humiliation couldn't stop at a whiteboard and a little ACL damage. *eg*

Of course, Elizabelth with her

Re: Don't worry about it! :-D As long as you liked it, I'm happy! :-D

[maching_monkey]

That para made it in for you, actually, reckoned you'd appreciate it. ;-) Sheppard had to be relegated, really, his humiliation couldn't stop at a whiteboard and a little ACL damage. *eg*

For me? Really? That's so cool! Thank you!

I did love it.

*nods* Overconfidence: Sheppard's #1 flaw. Being Smarter Than Sheppard: McKay's #1 advantage. Will they ever learn? God I hope not, it'll really cut down on the smut. ;-)

Hee hee. I'm totally with you on that. Somehow, I doubt it. ;->

Thank you too for being REALLY nice about this and umm... having fun. *eg*

You are more than welcome. I just calls 'em like I sees 'em, after all. :-D

Leah

Re: Don't worry about it! :-D As long as you liked it, I'm happy! :-D

[munchkinott]

For me? Really? That's so cool! Thank you!

Yup. *nods* To paraphrase like mad I gave you my warped POV on Sheppard/Teyla in all of it's knee-kicking glory a couple of weeks ago and you said something along the lines of 'anything that involves Teyla kicking Sheppard in the knee' is fine by you... so Sheppard got kicked in the knee. *eg* And if you squint really hard at the fic umm... I noticed there's hints of my OT3 in there. *cough* COMPLETELY unintentional. So unintentional I only picked it up this evening (then promptly forgot where all the Word auto-grammar 'corrections' I'd been looking for were. *headdesk*).

I did love it.

Very glad you did. *thinks* You're not humouring me because I'm clinically certifiable are you?

Hee hee. I'm totally with you on that. Somehow, I doubt it. ;->

Mwahahahahahaha! Here's to Sheppard being stuck in perpetual rug-being-pulled-out-from-under-his-feetness! And many a Hail Rodney! ;-)

You are more than welcome. I just calls 'em like I sees 'em, after all. :-DYou're far too nice! You know