FIC: Vent (SG:A, Gen, PG-13)

Dec 03, 2004 10:48

Title: Vent
Author: Munchie (munchkinott)
Type: General
Rating: PG-13

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kageygirl December 5 2004, 00:38:59 UTC
Whoa, Munchie. This is just--beautiful and horrible, all at the same time. McKay's so clinical that it's both detached and visceral. I'm just--in awe.

Whoa.

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munchkinott December 5 2004, 17:12:59 UTC
Whoa, Munchie. This is just--beautiful and horrible, all at the same time. McKay's so clinical that it's both detached and visceral. I'm just--in awe.

*verrrrrrrrrrrrry sheepish grin* Thank you. I really wish I could analytically attack this one in a 'I meant to do that-there' kind of way. But it just sort of appeared... *gulp* The temp readings act like paragraph breaks, I've got whole sentences smaking down like carriage returns. Can you do that? *blinks* 'Cause I think I did it anyway. *double blink*

Whoa.

*joins you in whoa-ness shock*

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maching_monkey December 5 2004, 02:56:40 UTC
Awesome story. Absolutey riveting. And horrifying.

I refuse to believe it's a deathfic, though. Grodin or Zelenka (or, hell, Ford!) will save them! The'll get out before it's too late!

maybe you'll write a sequel? Where they get out? Please?

Wonderful story, Munchie. Awful, but wonderful.

Leah

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munchkinott December 5 2004, 17:27:32 UTC
Awesome story. Absolutey riveting. And horrifying.

Thank you. :-D I wish I knew where it came from. *whimper* Really. I was trying to write McKay getting all hot and sweaty and half-nekkid and... it went funny on me. *wail*

I refuse to believe it's a deathfic, though. Grodin or Zelenka (or, hell, Ford!) will save them! The'll get out before it's too late!

It's not a deathfic. *g* I just warned it up the wazoo 'cause otherwise I'd be whined at for letting 'deathfic' out without a warning. *g* Oh you KNOW Ford & Beckett's team'll get there in time - pull the failsafe release and McKay'll be the first to drop through in a wet, crumpled, unconscious heap...

maybe you'll write a sequel? Where they get out? Please?

No. 'Cause if I do that it's giving a definitive ending to something that could go either way. :-D

Wonderful story, Munchie. Awful, but wonderful.

Ta. :-) I did warn you that one day I'd get around to hurting 'em... *eg*

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maching_monkey December 5 2004, 22:57:30 UTC
Ta. :-) I did warn you that one day I'd get around to hurting 'em... *eg*

You did indeed. And carried through on it beautifully.

I like the idea of McKay slumping out in a wet, unconscous heap, followed by a billow of boiling air...

Great stuff, Munchie. Though now I really am considering whumping John in the head with the flume. ::eg::

Leah

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munchkinott December 5 2004, 23:46:41 UTC
You did indeed. And carried through on it beautifully.

One day I will get to the scale of personalised, unspeakably vindictive violence... *watches Sheppard & McKay muses cower* But 'til then the Bain McKay'll just have to do. *eg*

I like the idea of McKay slumping out in a wet, unconscous heap, followed by a billow of boiling air...

It's quite aesthetically pleasing... especially when you consider how wet clothing clings and that The Blue T-shirt is unzipped halfway down. Poor scalded woobie. I bet he'd flatline on the way to the medical bay too... *evil cackle*

Great stuff, Munchie. Though now I really am considering whumping John in the head with the flume. ::eg::

Mwahahahahaha! Though you know I see 'em having a doggy-paddling water-treading full blown bitch out then just to reinforce his point Sheppard stands up and the water barely comes to his knees. *eg*

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