Castle Fic - A Terrible Hope

[muppet47]

Her own screams wake her up, and it takes her a second to realize she is the one making that horrible, ragged noise.   Kate chokes back the next scream, her throat sore, her heart pounding so hard she can feel it in her fingertips, sweat sticking her hair to her neck and her cheeks.

Her eyes are wide in the darkness, but she can still see the

Comments

[mack_the_spoon]

Excellent. Lovely. Heartbreaking and beautiful.

[namarie24]

Oh, this is wonderful! I love it. I can see it all unfolding, and your Beckett and your Castle ring so very true.

[yen35]

Lovely piece. I wish it happened on the show. Thanks for sharing.

[fading_ripples]

This is fantastic! I love how you described the total fear you feel when you really love someone. Everyone always describes loving someone as a joyous feeling, which it is, but it's also quite heartbreaking at times. So this is perfect! ♥

[in_coffee_city]

Lovely! I can see this happening in the show. Congratulations and thanks for sharing!