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[must_fear_harpy]

Prompt: Rapunzel has a MAN in her tower, Flynn won't leave till he gets his satchel back, and Mother Gothel will be away for three days. What to do, what to do...
Warnings: Smut. Flynn being awful.

Comments

Waaaah

[yuenmei]

You bastard, haha.

Flynn is the supreme asshole. This was really well written. He's such a conniving fucktard. The part when he wipes his fingers on his pants breaks my heart!!! He brushes something so world-shattering for her aside completely. Wipes it on his pants! Argh!

Well I could wax poetic/analytic about this for several pages and I could write an angsty R's POV response to this but I will spare you both.

Clearly you are cut out for this though! Do more prompts do more prompts! Or post prompts!

Re: Waaaah

[must_fear_harpy]

Bwahaha!
We all know Flynn's a jerk until he has a near death experience.

I feel like a terrible person for writing this, but it had to be said. I'm glad it worked out.

Re: Waaaah

[promisemewings]

You're not a terrible person for writing that because it IS true. He was just trying to get Rapunzel back in the tower so he could get his dumb man-purse back until they nearly died and she healed his hand.

He's an ass, but my favorite character in the movie. KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB!!! (BTW, OP from disney_kink here, not so anonymous anymore, LOL.)

Re: Waaaah

[must_fear_harpy]

Thanks. Way to come up with an awesome prompt.

Sorry. I fixed my settings to allow anonymous comments now.

[yuenmei]

And holy Jesus your next fic should be an alternative telling ala the inaccurate IMDB synopsis - Rapunzel's orgasm gives her the nerve to leave the tower and find him, thinking he's a sex God, which he kind of is. So many possibilities!!!

[fennelwink]

Seconded!!

Interesting take of how it could have all gone down. He totally would have done that at that point if he could have! Glad things didn't really work out how he initially wanted them to.

[amphetamine_47]

This is AMAZING. I love what an utter, self serving bastard Flynn is because, let's face it, he's a whole different animal from Eugene. This is how the story might've gone if it was for adults. Excellent work!

[anonymous]

Wow. I can actually see Flynn doing something like that too. Eugene, no. Flynn most definetly. That was wow...

Hooray!

[anonymous]

I had really hoped you'd go ahead and fill this. Partly because you're responsible for my new interest in Tangled smut and partly because I knew it would be awesome beyond words. And it is! The end made me want to cry, but it's perfectly in character. More soon, please!