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must_fear_harpy

Just Two Things

Feb 23, 2011 20:27

Prompt: Pascal's POV when he encounters Flynn and Rapunzel getting intimate
Warnings: Non-explicit sex

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Comments 14

yuenmei February 24 2011, 02:35:28 UTC

LOL. Best line "...their need to frantically and repeated agree with one another." definitely laughed out loud, priceless.

I also love that you manage to have Flynn's orgasm be smoking hot even through Pascal's disgruntled POV. Damp hair in disarray *fans self*. I'm yoinking that image for future lemons.

yuenmei February 24 2011, 02:36:03 UTC

'course now I see it should be repeatedLY but I didn't even see that the first two times I read it.

must_fear_harpy February 24 2011, 02:41:44 UTC

Bam! Corrected! Thanks.

I'm glad you liked it!

promisemewings February 24 2011, 02:54:39 UTC

Oh THANK YOU for this. I laughed; this was really good.

Just so you know, I read this whole thing with my Pascal plushie staring at me from on my desk. Oh, and a Trojan commercial is playing in the background on the TV.

I especially liked "for a moment they whisper to each other as if whispering now will in some way make up for their previous noisy transgressions."

must_fear_harpy February 24 2011, 03:00:17 UTC

Glad you liked it! This was a good prompt because one of the most frequent questions I get is "holy shit, was Pascal watching that?"

pure_trance February 24 2011, 21:39:23 UTC

Loved it! Like the first person said, I love how even though Pascal is clearly annoyed and it's from his POV it still manages to be hot!

promisemewings February 25 2011, 02:15:59 UTC

Oh wow, I just realized you did WYDK. That was amazing.

saku_teiki February 26 2011, 14:25:31 UTC

This is so cute and sexy at the same time.

When you think about it, sex is really ... gross. Gross isn't the right word.

I read this yesterday before work but didn't get around to commenting until now.

Poor Pascal. At least he's not embarrassed by it because he's still not quite sure what's really going on. I LOVE that Pascal doesn't remember Eugene's name! It's obviously not important. :)