Comments | must_fear_harpy: Breathless

must_fear_harpy

Breathless

Aug 03, 2011 16:34

It's the snuff prompt.
Warnings for sex and character death.

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Comments 8

OMG! WTF! ketbelle August 3 2011, 23:14:13 UTC

I didn't know how to express myself so I googled it: http://ih0.redbubble.net/work.3954032.1.ts,482x482,white,mens,ffffff.v3.jpg

It was just... wow. Good wow. Crazy wow. Am I strange for loving this?

As bizarre as it sounds I related to the feeling. If I discovered something that made me feel so much, I would never let it go. I would want it every day. Like drug.

The golden flower. Good drug name.

ext_551216 August 5 2011, 13:47:54 UTC

OK, first story of yours that I don't like. It's not about your writing, which as always, is terrific. And I think this is a great use of the prompt. Eugene's feelings are beautifully written. It's me - my biggest fear is the loss of The Spouse. So it's the whole snuff thing that's too much. And there's a tiny little part of me that resents Eugene for asking her to do it.

yuenmei August 5 2011, 15:19:22 UTC

Eugene is a selfish asshole and a terrible person.

chibimonkey13 August 6 2011, 01:35:08 UTC

Hmmm...I agree with Abigail. I love your writing, and if anyone could do this prompt it would be you and you did it as good it can be done, but this snuff thing just seems off and really out of character for Eugene...just...yeah.

You're still awesome though!!!

wittgens August 9 2011, 02:34:00 UTC

Wow. Just, wow. Flynn is a dick. So absurdly self absored.

This is incredibly well written.