I think I may like Ian, he seems to have some inbred prejudice but he's working to overcome it. A little slow though, definately not the sharpest sword in the armory.
I really think she would have - stood up for herself, that is -
In some chapter there was a short explanation, that mack was mainly tongue-tight around the "it-girls". Ian is just like the majority of us males, while our prick is in charge we do our best to hide our otherwise staggering intellect, dazzling charm and caring personalities. unfortunatley that little bugger is in charge most of the time :(
"Do you think you could you help but asking me?" I said through gritted teeth
Does this sit right in anyone elses head? it doesnt in mine...
-King Puppet PS Around Around the Rose petal Falls Down to the ground like its nothing at all sadness creaping, covering me nothing to see what should i be? who should i see?
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anonymous
July 30 2007, 13:26:22 UTC
So you think you can help **by** asking me? That was what I thought was meant....still using his words and structure, but making a much more understandable question.
it should think "Do you think you could help but asking me?" I think, just replacing the can't with can.. which means she would rather have him not ask her..
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Also, hooray! So wonderful seeing Mackenzie actually standing up for herself. I don't think she would have before she met Ammy, though.
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In some chapter there was a short explanation, that mack was mainly tongue-tight around the "it-girls". Ian is just like the majority of us males, while our prick is in charge we do our best to hide our otherwise staggering intellect, dazzling charm and caring personalities. unfortunatley that little bugger is in charge most of the time :(
- Mark
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Does this sit right in anyone elses head? it doesnt in mine...
-King Puppet
PS
Around Around the Rose petal Falls
Down to the ground
like its nothing at all
sadness creaping, covering me
nothing to see
what should i be?
who should i see?
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"Do you think you could you help but asking me?"
it should think "Do you think you could help but asking me?" I think, just replacing the can't with can.. which means she would rather have him not ask her..
anyway, great mack!
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If only Mack could do this when speaking to girls she'd be the master of everything!
Alas, she can't which is why she's so precious ^_^
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