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Marauder Rare Pairs ♦ Fic: Smoke and Mirrors

Oct 03, 2011 10:45

Title: Smoke and Mirrors
Author: perilousgard
Pairing: James/Petunia
Rating: PG
Word Count: 4,128
Prompt: 33. James/Petunia. At her sister's hen night, Lily receives a joke gift: a love potion. Petunia doesn't believe in these things, of course--of course, she doesn't. But she can't help but to wonder what would happen if she put just a few drops into Vernon ( Read more... )

p: james/petunia, submission: fic, c: james potter, c: petunia evans, fest: rare pairs, length: 1k-5k, rating: pg

Comments 9

ghrelin October 4 2011, 22:25:14 UTC

I really liked this story, it was a refreshing pairing I'd not seen before and it made me fall in love with James a little, too. I feel so sad for Petunia!

wwmrsweasleydo October 5 2011, 18:09:41 UTC

This is great. I love the explanation of canon, of Petunia's attitudes. Poor jealous Tuney. James was adorable.

sukebe_miroku October 5 2011, 20:56:22 UTC

*smug* <3 WELL! >> Ehehe. I love this. I do. To itty bitty pieces. And I am so glad you did it. *hearts* Petunia is so rare to find, and well written. I cannot express how well you captured her personality without going overboard. That in itself is a difficult feat. But to also manage James as well? He's a tricky bugger and you kept him in line. I think it's your grasp on Lily that kinda had a little whip out to keep James from going nuts. xD

... And now I hope I put that image in your head! <3

deathlydragon October 6 2011, 20:53:00 UTC

Wow, from looking at the prompt I thought this would be a pure comedy, but the story made me feel pretty bad for Petunia, actually. You did a great job with her. And James was a pleasure to read, too!

secretlypadfoot October 6 2011, 23:34:38 UTC

Poor Petunia, she deserves someone like James. This is a nice little story.