Waiting for the Sun - 8 - Lover, Find Your Cover

[my_moonandstars]

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In keeping in standing order with all his documentation - from his numerous college degrees, to his birth certificate, to his “legal” surname of Hale - Jasper had to cross reference over twelve ledgers on a regular basis.  That evening he worked through the numbers once more and his pen rest on a square on the calendar he had carefully

Comments

[ninanni]

This story is lovely! I hope you're still continuing it. You're a very talented writer and your style is very sweet and soft. It reminds me of a Polaroid (idk if that makes any sense, but that's what it reminds me of).
It's very interesting, that Jasper would be drawn to someone who negates his powers like Edward was to Bella. I'm curious to see how that plays out. But what will happen to Alice? Now that they're no longer married, will Jasper stay with the Cullens? Will Alice?
I really, really like this story. I think the way you're pacing the development of the relationship is very believable and sweet. Keep up the good work.

[my_moonandstars]

Thank you so much, that's such a beautiful description and no one's said that about my writing before ^__^ It really made me happy haha.

In regards to the Alice factor I tried to "settle" it in this chapter but she'll definitely come into play later on as well. And here and there I've tried to show how Jasper has been away from the Cullens for quite some time now, possibly at least a year+, and before that he'd always been itching to be 'somewhere else' even if he didn't know where that was.

I'm glad to have a new reader! I've had half a chapter ready since my last update so hopefully I'll get around to it soon :)

[my_princessbay]

:) always loved the story even on quizilla. Still sad to see that website go =( but i love this one =)

[my_moonandstars]

So sorry it's taken me so long to update! I've finally gotten some time again.

[my_princessbay]

It's okay

[my_moonandstars]

Just posted chapter 11! It's a pretty long one :)