Waiting for the Sun - 9 - Blueprint

Feb 16, 2015 17:07


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As soon as the sun rose above the mountains, Jasper hastened out onto the lake.  He waited and waited there afloat in hopes that Aurelia would take a look out her window and see him there and come to meet him as she had before.  All the events of the previous night kept agonizingly rewinding in his mind.  In his distress, he had acted ( Read more... )

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ninanni February 17 2015, 20:57:57 UTC
Very nice! I like that she's putting two and two together like that. I'm excited to see how she'll react when she finds out.
I loved that she closed the door in Jasper's face, that was hilarious and it made me laugh out loud, but I found it kind of strange that she told her mom it was just a sales man? and then all of a sudden they're eating at the table with him? That confused me a bit.

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my_moonandstars June 5 2015, 20:23:14 UTC
I'm so sorry I haven't updated in so long!

I think she was just in a panic and tried to make up something quick. When she ran upstairs, Jasper knocked again and her father invited him in that time. Hope that makes sense :)

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