The White Raven (fanficiton)

[myagedparchment]

Andriana had not been wrong about it being a long night, but she had been a bit off from the exact reality of the first night with the Raven.  It had not been a long night - it had been the longest night of her life.

Nothing she had done had been right.

“I might as well bathe in the river, this water is so cold.”

Nothing she had done had been good

Comments

[mirandyscrow]

Oh wow. Awesome chappy!! The horse scene was soo intense, the way described it I may as well been standing there watching it. I really do wonder what the Raven's going to think about that. More plz!!

[myagedparchment]

Thanks! Agamemnon will get more "screen" time :)

[jintymac]

I'm so happy you've updated this story again :D

The Raven is such a formidable character that she most people quaking in their boots and she certainly has a strong effect on Andy... I loved how Andy was able to calm her horse and I wonder what the Raven will think of that ;-)

I'm also intrigued by the shadowy character who was talking to the Raven about her goals and desires.

I love the story so far and can't wait for your next update :D

[myagedparchment]

Yay shadowy figures! Wait until that gets revealed, mwahahaha!!! XP

Thanks for reading!

[tanama30]

another great chapter love the whole horse scene can't wait to read more soon

[curiousleigh]

Thank you so much for the update. Enjoying this story more and more. Love the part with Agamemnon and Andriana. Please update again soon.

[myagedparchment]

Thanks! I'm enjoying writing it more and more, so yay! :)

[kdsusa3]

Awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.