Comments | myjulien: arashi fic: anseo

myjulien

arashi fic: anseo

Nov 24, 2009 00:20

Anseo (Irish for present/here)
Pairings: Aiba/Jun and Jun/Sho
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,156
Because I’m not doing je_holiday. I was wondering what to do about this but I ended up writing this instead. I... actually don’t like it.

( Jun decides to bypass the fist of people just beyond the set after his fourth consecutive bow; Jun is usually unfailingly polite but the echinacea he’d taken in the morning hasn’t worked as well as it usually does and he just wants to close his eyes for a moment. )

fic, arashi

Comments 57

floweranza November 23 2009, 18:36:27 UTC

♥

Seriously, I am so bad at leaving comments on fic, absolutely awkward at it, but this (your stuff) is always so lovely that I can't help but make a good try at it. I wish you weren't so hard on yourself, bb. Yes, this might need work for the ending, and maybe some fleshing out of ideas would complete it, but it still stands alone well. Your work, even the small drabbles, always leaves a strong emotional impact for me. It really has soul.

IN SHORTER FANGIRL TERMS I REALLY LIKE THISsssss. Poor Jun. Poor Aiba. Poor Sho. Asdkjfjhggk. ;n;;;; /admires!

myjulien November 24 2009, 04:25:52 UTC

Thank you, thank you! I'm inordinately glad that you can see just why I had problems posting this fic and yet still like it.

I completely empathize with the difficulty you face when faced with that white box above 'Post Coment'.

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flange5 November 23 2009, 19:56:33 UTC

I really loved this&hearts I don't know why you don't, except for the way that we're always harder on things we make than the things others do. Not to clamor for a sequel, but . . . *puppy eyes*

I loved the way, by the way that you fit in the entangled nature of their relationships without making someone directly the "bad" guy. I finished reading with a real sense of "poor everyone ^^;;" The awkward sort-of making things mostly back to normal when they just aren't was beautifully done, which I imagine would be really hard.

Anyway, I have never been good at comments, but &hearts

myjulien November 24 2009, 04:38:31 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! Especially for saying that about the resolution-that-wasn't.

It's probably because we know the things we make could and should be better. Which is why I'll give serious thought to penning a sequel.

I ♡ you for leaving me this absolutely lovely comment.

kestral_kitsune November 23 2009, 23:55:33 UTC

Wow....just ...wow. T__________________________T

i love how you wrote this, it was just..so smooth just wow..

thank you for sharing with us.

myjulien November 24 2009, 04:31:50 UTC

I always love when 'smooth' is used to describe my quality of writing so thank you very much! :)

rinalin November 24 2009, 01:59:25 UTC

okay, and now I need to find everything you've ever written about Arashi and STALK YOU.

This is WONDERFUL. I am always, always in love with Arashi in conflict. And this has it in spades and the way it's handled, it's so believable and sweet.

YAY YOU!

myjulien November 24 2009, 04:33:26 UTC

I don't even know what to say in response to that so here, have a pictorial depiction-

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blaue_lucifer November 24 2009, 03:16:03 UTC

im like "...."
0.0
the entire layout and flow of the story was awesome and the way you describe their emotions is <3 XDDDD
i will now starting readin all your fics 0.-

myjulien November 24 2009, 04:36:25 UTC

I am so happy.

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