arashi fic: anseo

[myjulien]

Anseo (Irish for present/here)
Pairings: Aiba/Jun and Jun/Sho
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,156
Because I’m not doing je_holiday. I was wondering what to do about this but I ended up writing this instead. I... actually don’t like it.

Comments

[toinkydoink]

This is. Just. I--

Okay. I am pretty sure that this isn't going to be the most coherent comment, but I just really wanted to let you know how beautiful this is. The emotions are just so intense and raw and powerful, and honestly, I haven't been this moved by fic in such a long time and it's the most refreshing feeling even though it's also absolutely heart-wrenching. /wooo incoherent epic run-on hello

I've read some of your other fics too (and I really, really feel bad about not being able to comment on them. D: D: D: /failfailfail) and I have to confess: I am absolutely in love with your voice and your style. It is--well, beautiful. And I am probably failing so hard at coherency right now but I really just can't find another word to describe it. Just...know that I'm in love with the way you write? ♥

And before this comment gets any creepier/more incoherent, I'm going to stop myself here. But, yes. Just. Thank you so much for this. I'm definitely bookmarking so that I could come back and read over and over and over again. ♥

your icon is gorgeous.

[myjulien]

I could possibly be floating on a cloud of euphoria right now due to this amazing comment.

Well, um. Firstly, I love your puppy!Jun fic, and read it all the time. And secondly, you probably don't know this but you recced my very first Arashi fic and I stumbled across the list and it really means an awful lot to me. So, thank you.

[iced_snow]

Eh.. I don't know if this was angst or not.. or if the ending was sad. I guess I was distracted by the beautiful writing.
This was really, really good

[myjulien]

I do really have to work on being clearer. Thank you for reading and this comment. I really appreciate it. ♥

[maiaide]

It was just so melancholy! Aiba willing to give it up and then Jun goes and fucks it up in the end anyway. I couldn't tell if he really had feelings for Sho or not, or he was just thinking with this dick.

I did get a little bit lost in your transitions, between Aiba/Jun and then Jun/Sho but that added to the chaos and confusion of their relations so it worked in your favour in the end. :D

[myjulien]

I'll confess that I really do like being vague/displaced but I don't want to use that excuse to get away with bad writing for fic all the time.

You've been posting excerpts from William Zinsser and I find myself wincing a bit, especially in the case of 'decidedly', which I decidedly used in this piece.

I always appreciate your comments- they're very helpful to me.

[maiaide]

Haha and I have most definitely used "arguably" before. XD

I'm pretty much going to post half the book. XD It's what all of us need to read. I'm catching myself making all these slips that he points out. >_> I'm enjoying rereading this.

[maibachan]

Holy crap...
Sorry - but that was amazing. Once again I'm sure I am astounding you with my ability to form incredibly insightful comments....

I ♥ this.

[myjulien]

No, I really love when you comment to tell me you like what I write because I really do like what you write.

[daisuki_dkzen]

Oh...wow...*is speechless* That was amazing, and beautiful, and heartbreaking.

Jun, dear Jun...♥

Thank you so much for sharing this.

[myjulien]

Wow, thank you for saying so!