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myjulien

arashi fic: anseo

Nov 24, 2009 00:20

Anseo (Irish for present/here)
Pairings: Aiba/Jun and Jun/Sho
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,156
Because I’m not doing je_holiday. I was wondering what to do about this but I ended up writing this instead. I... actually don’t like it.

( Jun decides to bypass the fist of people just beyond the set after his fourth consecutive bow; Jun is usually unfailingly polite but the echinacea he’d taken in the morning hasn’t worked as well as it usually does and he just wants to close his eyes for a moment. )

fic, arashi

Comments 57

r_1_ss_a November 27 2009, 17:23:49 UTC

i'm so late in commenting but i didn't want to NOT comment.

i really liked this. poor aiba. i felt for him the most. <3

thank you for writing and sharing!

myjulien November 28 2009, 08:27:00 UTC

Your feeling compelled to comment greatly cheers me. Thank you!

phrenk November 28 2009, 10:43:21 UTC

I like it! I like it a lot, and I usually avoid angst like the plague. So it must be good. : ) Sigh, it also makes me cry.

OH, AIBA. OH.

And this is a sexy Sho, goddamn. (I'm so glad he didn't know about Jun and Aiba, my heart couldn't have taken that at ALL.)

I'm also really glad you included Kokuritsu.

ALSO: OH, AIBA. AIBA.

And love. Thank you for sharing!

myjulien November 29 2009, 17:20:43 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like it, truly.

For what it's worth, I never want you to stop writing Aiba/Ohno.

phrenk November 29 2009, 19:02:31 UTC

Your stuff always makes me feel so many feelings. ♥♥

Awww, that is worth a lot to me! I love Aiba/Ohno and for some reason find it easier to write than ... anything else. (Although really I haven't written that much of anything so far.) I have ten or eleven fics in progress that I am attempting to write, with many different pairings, and I haven't had any luck for weeks. One look at that Aiba/Ohno prompt and my brain was like OH HERE WE GO. And then there was fic, at last! Thanks, awesome prompter, thanks, Aiba/Ohno! :D

b00kw0rm79 December 13 2009, 19:12:57 UTC

I was reading some fics and somehow found this story.
When I finished reading it, I turned to my dog and said 'I don't get it.'
I know I like this story, but I'm not sure I can put into words why.

I mean it's sad and it didn't have a happy ending, but it did have closure.
I feel so bad for Jun and Aiba and Sho and Arashi as a whole.

Thank you for sharing your story. I love reading stuff that is different from other stories.

myjulien December 23 2009, 09:12:07 UTC

I really like and appreciate your comment so, thank you! It means a lot. ♥

augustfai December 28 2009, 01:19:56 UTC

Okay, so...I know this is dreadfully late, but when you first posted this I wanted to read it but school got in the way (this is becoming such a shitty, redundant excuse, and I apologize for it, I really do) and now I'm lying on my bed trying to piece together my broken heart, because this--oh, this. The images are just--gah, I can't describe anything without being really cheesy and talking about how you kind of just took my soul and stepped on it with your writing and I know that sounds horrible but I don't mean it in that way--I mean to say that the way you put words together, it's like being in a dream where one thing flows to the other and there's a blur, there, with no real distinction of what exactly is going on or why, but personally I really like that. There's a way to be fluid and absolutely clear-cut on what is going on and there's a way to be fluid in the sense that you are really just going along with wherever the water takes you, and this reads like the latter. Your style is so gorgeous and smooth and packed with such ( ... )

myjulien December 29 2009, 04:05:48 UTC

I love you. A lot. ♥

I love how you write. I think your words are beautiful, like gossamer, and you'll understand if I say your leaving me this comment makes me incredibly happy. I look up to you a lot (oh I'm the creeper here) and I seriously love how contemplative your response is, how you wrote about the oneiric quality of my fic.

And it's not overbearing, it's...I don't want to say light, or easy, but it's an ending that doesn't tell its readers how to feel or what to think. It's all very up-in-the-air and 'well, what do you think is going on here?', and sometimes I like that lots more than an ending that brings the story to a complete close.

Oh god, thank you. You have my heart. :)

__sine January 8 2010, 02:16:02 UTC

So I said I was saving your fic for a rainy day and while it isn't really one I came by to read this and IT IS INCREDIBLE.

I'm not sure if I mentioned this in my comment for Spica but I love the way sex is not merely the end of the story or its starting point, but has everything to do with how the fic unfolds. I'm putting this across really clumsily but - it's not just hot; it means something in the general scheme of things; there is a function to all those scenes and it worksMore than that, I think it ties in with how well you understand the characters. Their interactions here really got to me - I loved Jun and Aiba, and I loved Jun and Sho when that popped up, and Nino and Ohno, when they appeared, seemed spot on to me ( ... )

myjulien January 8 2010, 11:27:00 UTC

It is always a rainy day where we live.

Why are you so amazing? This comment is so much more than I deserve. I love you for validating the sex (!!) and my characterization and dynamics.

I feel that this is also providence because I've been having To Be Found Next Summer on a Riverbank open in a tab and I am savoring it.

Something had clicked, then, in that strong, clean surge backwards, his wrists snapping perfectly as he guided himself across the water.

I love how you make my heart contract briefly then pulse again faster with how you craft a story. I should probably leave a coherent, well thought-out comment on it but I can't tear my eyes away from the goods on my page just yet.

And I'm not the only one who loves you, as evinced by this and this one too. :)

(I love you for these little hearts too, mademoiselle

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__sine January 9 2010, 03:37:48 UTC

It was the least I could do; your fic was so lovely. ♥

I am flailing a bit that you are reading To Be Found! :D Like I was telling g_esquared, I've completely lost perspective on it so I cannot decide whether I like it or hate it any more. And yeah, when I saw the recs I was all OMG and spazzy.

(♥ how do you get your hearts to be red and shiny)

Koyuki needs more love! As do zombies. And perhaps Nino. :D KwP was the first jdrama I watched, if I'm not wrong, so...

myjulien January 12 2010, 15:51:47 UTC

By the way, if you're still interested in getting emoji: http://community.livejournal.com/okimiyage/11790.html

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