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mymuseandi

SPN Fic: Tête-à-tête with God

Apr 07, 2011 17:01

Fandom: Supernatural

Genre: Gen

Rating: PG-13 for a couple of the F words

Word count: ~1, 900

Characters: All three Winchesters, wee!Dean and wee!Sam, Pastor Jim

Spoilers: Set pre-series, no spoilers!

A/N: This is written for hoodie_time Writing Between the Lines Challenge, for this prompt by purple_carpets . I have a feeling it doesn't come close to what you envision, ( Read more... )

spn fic: tête-à-tête with God, spn

Comments 20

fifimom April 7 2011, 09:17:55 UTC

Thanks for your persistance in posting. This is really very sad but also a very nice read.

mymuseandi April 7 2011, 10:33:50 UTC

Wow, that was fast! LJ was being so difficult, and thank god it decided to behave itself when it did.

A bit sad, yeah, but i think the Winchesters themselves won't have really happy childhoods, except maybe when it comes to Sam. :)

Thanks for reading!

primrose_1 April 7 2011, 13:18:23 UTC

I suddenly feel very tired for Pastor Jim. Very sweet and painful- good one, lady!

mymuseandi April 8 2011, 03:18:28 UTC

Thank you! I couldn't have finished it without you clearing some stuff.

And yes, Pastor Jim has a lot on his plate when it comes to the Winchesters!

weesta April 7 2011, 13:18:43 UTC

Awww...so sad. I really like Pastor Jim's POV throughout. The little moment at the end with Dean and John just killed me!

mymuseandi April 8 2011, 03:24:02 UTC

Thank you! I think Pastor Jim would have made a very good character should he be given more on-screen time, but since he isn't, i tried to bring him to 'life', in a manner of speaking. I'm glad you like it!

I love that John and Dean moment too! I love wee!chester moments with John, generally LOL

purple_carpets April 7 2011, 15:47:31 UTC

OMGOMG, I LOVE YOU!

Uhm...thoughts...I had thoughts on this and uhm...stuff to tell you but my brain is sort of stuck on a loop of OMGYOU'REAWESOME! and PASTORJIIIIM and WEEEEE!

You're right it's nothing like I envisioned and I LOVE that. It's hurty and angsty and depressing and somehow incredibly sweet and I have such a thing for John hurting Dean-o unintentionally and then feeling terribly guilty about it later and I love how Sammy just goes along with Dean in staying silent and then apologizing and you nailed Pastor Jim's POV!

*adds you as a friend because YOU ROCK*

mymuseandi April 8 2011, 03:29:12 UTC

*breathes a sigh of relief*

You don't know how much it pleases me that you love the story! It was such an eye-catching prompt, and the style is pretty different from how i usually write, so to have the prompter say that it was good was great!!!

Wee!Sam is my fave in this fic. I like that he doesn't really seem to play a part in the scenes, but he really does, because, without adorable wee!Sam, we can't get protective wee!Dean! LOL

*adds You as a friend back because YOU ROCK TOO!!!*

harrigan April 7 2011, 21:24:14 UTC

I love folks writing Pastor Jim. You did a very nice job on his POV, and believable characterization throughout!

mymuseandi April 8 2011, 03:31:24 UTC

Thank you! I tried to get this Pastor Jim to be likeable, or believable at any rate, because there's so much potential that's unexplored in the show. And going through an outsider POV is also something that i rarely, if ever, did, so yeah, great that you like it!!! :)