I Need Your Help!

[myrabidpetspoon]

I have no Beta, so I have no one to throw my writing ideas off of. I'm hoping maybe someone here can help me. Basically, I need to stylistically distinguish between what is occurring in "real life" and what is happening in a video. I'm having trouble figuring out how to do it.

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[awieatti]

I'm not sure if I can help, but I'll try :D

[myrabidpetspoon]

(It's for my Yami no Matsuei/Tiger & Bunny crossover. :P )

I ended up using a block quote in addition to the tense change for the video. I was limited in formatting options due to the html allowed on Archive of Our Own, but I think it works well.

I appreciate your input. It definitely helped me work through it and figure out what impact I wanted the scene to have. Hopefully other people like the end result as well, haha.

[awieatti]

Oh then I guess I need to finish watching the series soon - I'm approximately at the middle now :)

I'm glad I could help you out a little! If you have any other problems where you need some input, just ask :D