TOWJWAGABI, Part 2

[myrna1_2_3]

This is more experimental than I usually am. Usually, I totally know where the story is going and even though I adore comments and feedback and suggestions from readers, I've already got the story mapped out in my head, so the suggestions don't really figure in to the rest of the story

Comments

[rose7]

I am glad that you haven't decided yet, how to end this. You made me feel Brian's pain and confusion, and a part of me hopes that in the end Brian will end up wiser, happier and with Justin. But I also really like Dan and the relationship he has with Justin.
I like everything you write and I am really glad that you started something new and as exciting as this.

[myrna1_2_3]

Aww, thanks for such a nice note! So glad you like the story!

[bluesmoke]

i fucking like Dan. he's normal and he's utterly in love Justin, and damnit, it feels good to have some normalcy for Sunshine.

But Brian breaks my heart-- he honestly didn't think he'll miss Justin that much, did he? *sighs for the poor boy* But fuck, who does he think he is?!!!! typical.

Gods. I adore this series. Your Original Character is wonderfully characterized...

and I loved this chapter because of the two different voices-- two men who love Justin, and it was good to see both stories. I really liked how you made each voice unique, and how effortlessly you made the switch. Please write more soon~! *begs*

[myrna1_2_3]

Thanks for all of the kind words!

I like playing with a really normal guy--QAF doesn't really give us any of those!

More's a-coming eventually!

[bluesmoke]

More's a-coming eventually!

Thank YOU!!!!! I am eagerly waiting updates.

[dorset77]

Wonderful, as always. I needed to go back to part one to recall how old Dan is suppose to be. So, while Brian is pulling together the holidays for the Liberty ave. gang, Justin is dealing with the death of his mom? Brian realizes he is missing him as Justin is suffering not only without Brian but without any of his extended family. Sad...really sad. And none of the group knew he was still in Pitt.? Oh, could it be Ben knew what with the CM connection? With your imagination and ability to pull these characters together I can't wait to see what you decide to do. So many possibilities. My thanks, as always.

[myrna1_2_3]

Glad you're enjoying the story so far!

I'm pretty sure no one knew Justin was still in town. And with Justin cutting off his cell phone, those who would have been most likely to keep in touch with him (Lindsay & Melanie and Deb) would have waited for Justin to get in touch with them and when he didn't... Well, there was a new baby to worry about and an older baby who was probably more of a handful than ever!

Thanks for the comments!

[anonymous]

everything you write is so amazingly well that i am always left speechless and thinking about your story hours after i am done reading it... i can't write well and english is not my first language, but i always wanted to beg a fanfic writer, to write a story where Brian pushes Justin away, sees him again after a long period of time of 'no time no seen' and Justin is doing great with someone else.Then the "what ifs" start to haunt Brian

[myrna1_2_3]

I am very curious to see how and if you are gonna get B&J back together...

Me too! Writing stories is easier when you know what is supposed to happen next!

Thanks so much for the lovely comments! So glad you're enjoying the fic!

[mlheathen]

This is far too stressful to be as enjoyable as it is.

The fight scene where Justin says he won't go with his tail between his legs and Brian says that Justin is getting more than anyone else ever did is just incredible. It rang so true to these characters.

Brian realizing he misses Justin is just so GUH! He makes me want to beat him and hug him all at the same time.

Loved Justin's coming on to Dan and his "litmus test". Also really enjoyed (against my will) the story of how they came to be a couple. The scene with Charlie (who is one of my people, the ishers) is a riot.

Really, Myrna you are far too evil to be so popular. No one else could split them up and give Justin a new boyfriend and make us all go, "Well, maybe..."

I am still pulling for Brian though, he won't survive without Justin. Dan, however, what with all that emotional well being, would bounce back...eventually.

Also- does Dan have to be so damn perfect? Can't you give us something to not like? Like a snaggletooth. A snaggletooth would be perfect.

[myrna1_2_3]

Brian realizing he misses Justin is just so GUH! He makes me want to beat him and hug him all at the same time.

Isn't that the quintessential Brian?

Also- does Dan have to be so damn perfect? Can't you give us something to not like? Like a snaggletooth. A snaggletooth would be perfect.

Hee! Come on! Dan's a little thin-skinned, right? He didn't take Charlie and Justin's teasing very well. Justin mollified him, of course, by appealing to his sexual vanity. Wonder where he learned that trick? :p

Thanks for the feedback!

[mlheathen]

See, but the thing with him just being thin skinned is that it leaves Justin absolutely no reason to leave him.
Brian is thin skinned and Justin stuck with him....
Thin skinned is not problematic enough :)

I know! He secretly kills his patients. Now there's a character flaw!

Also I do realize that I am an insane person. And that I have completely removed Justin's thoughts and feelings from the equation and only focused on what it would do to Brian. Which is wrong. Bad me.
But Justin would be happy with either of them, once Brian got his head out of his ass. So I am going to go back to my earlier belief that Brian needs Justin more. Therefore they are still OTP!!

Also, if Brian wins him back you'll have to write out how, and I love how you make Brian into the best version of himself he could possibly be. And how could Justin possibly resist that?

Thanks for the feedback!
No-thank you for writing this.
Ok. Will leave you alone now.