TOWJWAGABI, Part 2

[myrna1_2_3]

This is more experimental than I usually am. Usually, I totally know where the story is going and even though I adore comments and feedback and suggestions from readers, I've already got the story mapped out in my head, so the suggestions don't really figure in to the rest of the story

Comments

[punkdoc]

I usually don't care for non-canon characters, but you do a great job making them fully realized. Naturally I have that inclination for Justin and Brian to always end up together, but I really like the character of Dan. So my hat is off to you for making me like a Justin/OMC pairing, even if I eventually want Dan to get the boot.

[punkdoc]

Just wanted to add -- you write the most poignant angst of any QAF fic writer out there. It pains me so and yet I can't stop reading, LOL.

Also, it occurred to me that the main reason I want to see Brian and Justin get back together in this story is for Brian. Because he is a mess without Justin. I've always thought he really needed Justin more than Justin needs him.

[myrna1_2_3]

I really like the character of Dan.

Me too! I'm trying hard not to like him too much though. I don't want to become so enamoured of him that I can't make him screw up.

I've always thought he really needed Justin more than Justin needs him.

I think there's some truth to this, though I like the couple most when their being together makes each one of them better than they are when apart.

If I may quote a Hallmark card for a moment! :p

Thanks for the kind words--they're much appreciated!

[reboot_wlm]

I'm gonna have to wait until the finish for this one and read the last line. If you break them up for good, I'll cry. I'm already freakin over this next season with stuff and I need fic reinforcement.

[myrna1_2_3]

I'm already freakin over this next season with stuff and I need fic reinforcement.

Why do we let these evil TV shows do this to us! We should DEMAND that they tell us exactly how the show is going to play out. Then, if I decide to watch it, I'll know exactly what I'm getting into!

[myrna1_2_3]

I'm speechless and cannot offer any coherent feedback.

I thank you kindly just the same!

[needfire]

Brilliant! So very Brian and God that is Justin to a tee. It's so conflicting, I want to hate Dan but I can't, I like him and his brother. I find the behavior of the liberty crew so disappointingly believable. Thank you lass, again I am hooked.

[myrna1_2_3]

Thanks so much for the kind words--glad you're enjoying the fic!