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TOWJWAGABI, Part 2

Mar 13, 2004 16:12

This is more experimental than I usually am. Usually, I totally know where the story is going and even though I adore comments and feedback and suggestions from readers, I've already got the story mapped out in my head, so the suggestions don't really figure in to the rest of the story ( Read more... )

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lilianna_surrin March 14 2004, 21:43:51 UTC

you write so good, and you brake my heart.I love your writing so much, you make them all come to life, and that's just what makes it so hard, because deep inside I want the big love of B\J to win. I want Brian to overcome his fears (well, it's fears that hold him back, right?) and shaw us all that love will make you grow. vary sassy of me, I know. so much angst, but still hope. thank you so much.

anonymous March 15 2004, 08:36:21 UTC

Hey, if you write Dan like this, how the f**king hell am I suppose to root for a B/J reunion?!?!? Now, you just have to kill Dan the natural way, because he "seems" to be a reflective kind soul who LOVES our Sunshine. Either make him a psychopath or give him a painless, instant accidental death! Gosh, which means another person whom Sunshine loves die on him.

But I guess Brian can eat crow a little while longer. Show us more, please!

On holding pattern! Sigh

Sitting at a stop light smartwomn1 March 16 2004, 10:18:04 UTC

Sometimes, when I'm driving around or sitting at a stop light or have another free brain moment, I have (in the past) let my mind roll the scene of Brian and Justin at Gus' graduation party (Brian throws his head back to laugh, Justin reaches up to "feel" the smile...)

Since I read the scene of Justin and Dan in the kitchen with the candles and the lasagna that's the scene I roll over in my mind. I've selected Colin Firth to "play" Dan because I cannot think of another guy taller than Brian (even tho' Colin is too old -- it's my brain) and I am crazy about Firth. I have to come home and read that passage almost every day.

So, I wait with the others to see WHAT will happen next.

lexii314 March 16 2004, 11:16:01 UTC

OMG! OMG! OMG!
::Pulling hair out::
Brian is SO VERY FUCKED! Justin tells this guy that he "Loves Him"???
NOOOOOOOOOOO... Yes, so far I like D__ but... NOOOOOOOO!
Brian needs to fix this and FIX IT GOOD!

Really good. on_the_ground March 17 2004, 08:15:36 UTC

Hi,

Just telling you that I loved both parts. I was really waiting for this part 2 and I have to tell you too that, personally, I wouldn't mind if Justin stayed with Dan at the end... (and I always want them together) but so far this guy is not Ethan at all and I'd like to see more of them together.

Thanks!