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TOWJWAGABI, Part 4

Apr 13, 2004 13:00

Here's part 4!

( The One Where Justin's With Another Guy, and Brian Interferes, Part 4 )

Comments 110

Yeah! anonymous April 13 2004, 10:21:07 UTC

Wow! You posted sooner than I expected. I'm just reading it now, but who's Bob?

Re: Yeah! snooks_md April 13 2004, 13:34:34 UTC

I'm thinking "Bob" is poor Dan's malaproprism for Ben. He *said* he was never going to remember everyone's names, didn't he?

Re: Yeah! viola69 April 13 2004, 15:37:08 UTC

I have to go back & double-check but I believe Bob is Emmett's boyfriend. Or is it Ted's?

Re: Yeah! myrna1_2_3 April 13 2004, 15:51:29 UTC

This part was originally going to be longer, but I decided to end part 4 where I ended it.

Anyway, the whole "Bob" thing is in service to a one-line little joke in the next part. Dan just has Ted's name wrong (poor Ted, it's always him, right?).

Imagine that when Justin is talking about "Ted" having a porn site on the web, Dan is thinking, "Who?"

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bliss_ April 13 2004, 10:32:47 UTC

WOW! Can't wait for more!!

What ever did Brian say to him???? *grin*

myrna1_2_3 April 13 2004, 15:54:31 UTC

Great, thanks!

Hmmm, sometimes, when I don't know what Brian should or would say, I cheat a little and make all of you decide!

bliss_ April 13 2004, 17:15:02 UTC

LOL works for me! :)

jaymalea April 13 2004, 22:54:51 UTC

Brian must have said "This is your family, and it has been for a long time. Don't forget that."

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joesther April 13 2004, 10:36:48 UTC

The more I read, the more I really like Dan. Not only that, but I like Dan and Justin together. Which really confuses me, 'cause I'm diehard B/J. So... when do I get to start disliking Dan and wanting Brian and Justin to get back together?

myrna1_2_3 April 13 2004, 16:00:45 UTC

Hee!

My evil plan is to have everyone switch allegiances every part!

joesther April 13 2004, 21:40:40 UTC

You are evil. Truly evil. I'm almost hating Brian here, and really, really liking Dan. I want Justin to be happy, and it seems he really is with Dan, so unless you change Dan around and make him into some drug-swilling, two-timing, cheating bastard who controls Justin with mind games and blackmail, I don't know if I'll be able to hate him. And that's just not fair, 'cause he BELONGS with Brian.

joesther April 13 2004, 16:00:56 UTC

Gosh, Dan is Sunshine-trainable. Already our young twink has him kissing in front of the house. ::flustering eye-lashes:: The two, despite the age difference, is still negotiating in their relationship and it's just sweet. I hope it'll last a bit longer before Brian lowers his guards to go after Justin--where it gets angsty...

I keep seeing Richard Gere as Dan! So I'm in no hurry to break them up. But the final analysis is still...a BJ reunion with hot monkey sex. LOL.

Signed, Loyalty-challenged.

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Wow. Ok, just about used up my lunch hour to read this- so worth it. viola69 April 13 2004, 10:36:53 UTC

And feel like I need to go back & re-read the 'silent' conversation between Brian & Justin to fully digest it- know in part it was a none-too-subtle jab that *THIS* is Justin's family that he's stayed away from too long. Love seeing this dinner through Dan's eyes- since so much he didn't quite understand including Justin's desire to fuck outside- other than it was a result of Brian.

So much goodness here though. :-)

Off to go forage for food now.

Re: Wow. Ok, just about used up my lunch hour to read this- so worth it. myrna1_2_3 April 13 2004, 16:13:39 UTC

in part it was a none-too-subtle jab that *THIS* is Justin's family that he's stayed away from too long

Exactly. Brian won't have Justin feeling like some lost little orphan when he has a support system in place!

Thanks for the comments!

Re: Wow. Ok, just about used up my lunch hour to read this- so worth it. viola69 April 13 2004, 18:00:25 UTC

Ok, just to clarify my own read here- I see a number of posts here that seemed to assume that Brian made some sexual overture to Justin hence Justin being ready to go once he & Dan get home. My own interpretation is that Brian & Justin's whole dialogue- both the body-language one and the verbal one- was about first Brian talking to Dan and then Justin's conversation with Debbie- and the reinforcement of *this* is your family, your not an orphan so stop acting like it. It was the proximity of being with Brian and a breaking down in some sense of the walls Justin had built up in being separate from the gang that lead to him being so eager, even desparate for the rush of sex in public and reconnecting with Dan. right?

Re: Wow. Ok, just about used up my lunch hour to read this- so worth it. myrna1_2_3 April 13 2004, 18:49:47 UTC

Your interpretation is more the way I see it as well.

For sure, Brian didn't make a pass at Justin. Brian is still gauging how Justin has dealt and is dealing with the death of his mother, and until Brian is sure he know where Justin's head is, he won't come on to him. At least not with patented Brian Kinney intensity!

I think Justin was so relieved and happy and comforted to be back with people he knows and who know him that he wanted to celebrate that--make the feeling last a little longer as it were.

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I loved it! anonymous April 13 2004, 10:56:50 UTC

I'm so glad you posted. I've been checking for days hoping you would. I'm really into this story and can't wait to see where your imagination takes it. Didn't understand the Bob thing though. And what did Brain whisper to Justin? It looked intresting that's for sure. Keep Writing!!!
Sarah

Re: I loved it! myrna1_2_3 April 13 2004, 16:20:46 UTC

And what did Brain whisper to Justin?

Something intense and very Brianesque, no doubt! Luckily, all of this section was in Dan's POV, so I didn't have to come up with Brian's little talk yet!

Glad you're enjoying the story!