Wonderful - it is clear once again, that while they have a very nice comfortable relationship - that there are parts of Justin that aren't getting fed ....
I really loved the silent conversation, and that Dan couldn't follow it. I am amused by Brian being so upset that Justin isn't following Brian's plan for his life.
Brian's face grew dark and suddenly the crickets were back. "Why?" he asked. "What the fuck happened to your art? Your art-that's how you always referred to it. That's what it was always fucking about! What the God damned fuck happened to that?"
I love his comments about Justin's art how he didn't try to hide his reaction. And Dan answering for Justin really pissed me off. I think Brian's ready to fight now and I can't wait. Like everyone else I loved the silent conversation and the fact the Justin went to Brian. I think certain side of Justin's personality are reemerging and I'm not sure Dan is ready for them.
"Justin's been out and loud since he was 17," Brian said. "Your acting like he's diseased every fucking time he touches you doesn't..."
I really didn't see this as just a way to rub his sex life with Justin in his face. I think Brian is starting to see how Justin is settling and I think that could be the one thing that really sets him off.
Brian's eyes narrowed even as he mocked Dan's
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I think Brian is starting to see how Justin is settling and I think that could be the one thing that really sets him off.
You may well be right! Of course Brian's mini nervous breakdown is what started everything in the first place, so if Brian were to do guilt, he might be feeling a little guilty about that!
Dan is not taking Brian seriously enough.
You're absolutely right. As far as Dan's concerned, Brian treated Justin so horribly that Dan can't imagine Brian being the least bit of a threat to his relationship with Justin. Why would Justin return to a man who was so shitty to him when he can be with a man who treats him well?
The time frame confuses me a bit. Shouldn't more time have passed than a year since Jerk-at-Work?
Hmm, now that you mention it, you may be right. A year and a half ago might be more accurate.
Sorry Dan. Maybe if he's as wonderful as most people think, he'll just bow out gracefully. Wishful thinking I know
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"Brian's eyes narrowed even as he mocked Dan's words. "There's no such thing as over as far as he's concerned. It'll always come back to me." Brian slowly circled around Dan, leaning close to Dan's ear as he slyly whispered, "You can blow the fucking shit out of arteries from now to the end of time, and it will always come back to me."
Alpha and Omega... or "As far as Justin is concerned, in the beginning was Me." Myrna in I'd Swim The Seas.
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I really loved the silent conversation, and that Dan couldn't follow it. I am amused by Brian being so upset that Justin isn't following Brian's plan for his life.
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I think you're right! I'm not sure Justin noticed before though!
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A jungle cat, indeed. ; )
Great humor and tension. Poor Dan.
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1. Who the fuck is Bob?
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2. Why haven't you killed Dan yet? (j/k)
I love this story, can't wait until the B/J love returns! Keep it cumming!!!
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2. Why haven't you killed Dan yet?
Death is too easy and too quick!
Thanks much for the kind words! Glad you're enjoying the story!
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Brian's face grew dark and suddenly the crickets were back. "Why?" he asked. "What the fuck happened to your art? Your art-that's how you always referred to it. That's what it was always fucking about! What the God damned fuck happened to that?"
I love his comments about Justin's art how he didn't try to hide his reaction. And Dan answering for Justin really pissed me off. I think Brian's ready to fight now and I can't wait. Like everyone else I loved the silent conversation and the fact the Justin went to Brian. I think certain side of Justin's personality are reemerging and I'm not sure Dan is ready for them.
"Justin's been out and loud since he was 17," Brian said. "Your acting like he's diseased every fucking time he touches you doesn't..."
I really didn't see this as just a way to rub his sex life with Justin in his face. I think Brian is starting to see how Justin is settling and I think that could be the one thing that really sets him off.
Brian's eyes narrowed even as he mocked Dan's ( ... )
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You may well be right! Of course Brian's mini nervous breakdown is what started everything in the first place, so if Brian were to do guilt, he might be feeling a little guilty about that!
Dan is not taking Brian seriously enough.
You're absolutely right. As far as Dan's concerned, Brian treated Justin so horribly that Dan can't imagine Brian being the least bit of a threat to his relationship with Justin. Why would Justin return to a man who was so shitty to him when he can be with a man who treats him well?
The time frame confuses me a bit. Shouldn't more time have passed than a year since Jerk-at-Work?
Hmm, now that you mention it, you may be right. A year and a half ago might be more accurate.
Sorry Dan. Maybe if he's as wonderful as most people think, he'll just bow out gracefully. Wishful thinking I know
Hee! Thanks so much for the comments! So glad you're enjoying the fic!
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Alpha and Omega... or "As far as Justin is concerned, in the beginning was Me." Myrna in I'd Swim The Seas.
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This story really has me on edge!
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