Comments | mz_bstone: REQUEST FOUR (?) for Dine: Firefly

mz_bstone

REQUEST FOUR (?) for Dine: Firefly

Mar 10, 2004 18:02

Dine said:

Firefly - Simon/Jayne

jealousy/envy
compare/contrast their backgrounds

I've no idea if this will suit. But here it is.

( Every Mother's Son )

Comments 16

nestra March 10 2004, 18:23:27 UTC

Aww! That's so perfectly simple, in all the best ways. It seems effortless.

thepouncer March 10 2004, 18:38:29 UTC

It certainly suits me. I love the way you evoke contrast of their childhoods and adulthoods. Yin and yang and love and rejection, all spun with a deft touch and a fabulous voice.

katie_m March 10 2004, 19:14:27 UTC

Oh, nice. I really like the way you circle back around at the very end there.

elynross March 10 2004, 19:26:09 UTC

But the thing was, Jayne had found that once you learned something you couldn't unlearn it.

Made a boy suspicious of learning.

This is my favorite part of the whole lovely bit. It's so very, very Jayne. And this is a very satisfying bit of Simon-Jayne for me.

tenebrae March 10 2004, 20:22:32 UTC

Wellllll......I liked it. :) I just watched all the DVDs last weekend so the hat thing was fresh in my mind. Thanks!