H5-0 Fic: Jersey Swagger

Feb 14, 2012 22:55

Title: Jersey Swagger ( Read more... )

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pug83 February 15 2012, 12:50:32 UTC
Really really hot, thanks for sharing!

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n0m_de_plum February 16 2012, 02:58:49 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it.

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i_m_sidhwen February 15 2012, 13:57:36 UTC
Hmm, hot! I like these one-sided stories!

(Looking forward to the next (last :( ) chapter of 5-0 First Dates too!)

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n0m_de_plum February 16 2012, 02:58:18 UTC
Thank you. I'll have it done...whenever. Lol

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i_m_sidhwen January 16 2013, 07:46:56 UTC
Just reread this, and gaahh, still hot :}
- I saw I had commented before so I'm replying in this thread ^^
Have you continued/finished 5-0 First Dates (I didn't see an updated post), or are you just not ready to say goodbye to it? ;)

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creedcascade February 15 2012, 14:07:03 UTC
This was good! It's nice to see fic with a confident Danny and Steve appreciating said confident Danny.

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n0m_de_plum February 16 2012, 02:56:59 UTC
Yes, indeed. Danny's often more confident in fic than he is in canon, so I tried to combine the two as much as possible.

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kitmerlot1213 February 15 2012, 19:16:49 UTC
“Well he tired to help me sext a target once-”

“Guys! Focus!” Steve said even though he was already heading for the stairs to the lower level.

“Lets just say Danny isn't exactly smooth,” Kono finished.

Lori chuckled briefly, “Somehow I'm not surprised to hear that about him.”

I hate to break it to Kono but just because Danny's bad at sexting doesn't mean that he doesn't have any game. It's actually better to be charming face to face then hiding behind a keyboard. And Lori's just jealous that he's never flirted with her before :)

So good for Steve for seeing how awesome Danny is and for wanting to see more of a confident Danny Williams :):)

Lovely work on this :)

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n0m_de_plum February 15 2012, 22:20:54 UTC
First of all, thanks for the review.

And Lori's just jealous that he's never flirted with her before :)

Actually that isn't 100% accurate. Danny's kind of naturally flirtatious, so I don't put much stock in it on his side. However, someone brought up in another post that Lori was supposed to have feelings for Steve, but she had more on screen chemistry with Max and Danny. Which I agreed with. It was actually weird at certain points because you couldn't tell who they were trying to hint at. Max was obviously not a choice because the geeky supporting character never gets lead female, but with Danny it was very strange.

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navyvet90 February 15 2012, 22:32:43 UTC
Mmmm ... Lovely fantasy!

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n0m_de_plum February 16 2012, 02:56:02 UTC
Thank you!

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