Well, today was special. I got some heirloom type things. My great grandfathers pin from stanford, and some mother of pearl cufflinks + tie tack .. . never really got anything important before. .
hello againyournikkiSeptember 15 2006, 04:58:19 UTC
hey, i'm just writing to say that i would love to hear your feedback on some of my work. I've never written a book before and i'd love some advice. I posted the first paragraph of my book in my lj. I am doing that because the writing style and charasteristics are very clearly shown in the first paragraph and i'm wondering how to develop it more to grab peoples attention right from the beginning. I'd really like to see some of your works too. Get back to me anytime.
just to explainyournikkiSeptember 15 2006, 18:35:12 UTC
mostly i wrote to you because you said you were a writer too. and as you may have noticed, i don't have anyone else listed as friends. This journal is my place to let my thoughts out without anyone i really know knowing about it. So when i decided to continue work on my story i went looking for people to help maybe with character development or even style ideas. Basicaly i'm using you for what you know ;). don't feel obligated to write, i'd just like another writers opinions on some things.
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