Comments | nae_k: Yes. It's another post in which Nae gushes-nonsensical about things no one cares about ("Huzzah!")

nae_k

Yes. It's another post in which Nae gushes-nonsensical about things no one cares about ("Huzzah!")

Oct 16, 2008 11:42

It's much like when a 5 year old runs towards you, waving a piece of paper in their hand, excited to share with you a few scribbles they've just drawn--"See? See? That's a house! And, and that's... a tree!"

It's best to just nod and say, "That's nice, dear."

( Get ready for the pain that's sure to come )

my sad and sorry existence

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nae_k October 16 2008, 09:24:10 UTC

Well, it's completely up to you... but-OH-my-god-you-totally-should!

(Just kidding. I don't expect you to.)

Can't wait to see what Ricardo comes up with for our story. I'm all excited!

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somewhatlacking October 16 2008, 19:51:03 UTC

LOL, LOL, LOL!!!

I love the way you wright! It's so...colloquial! And hilarious! And fun! I absolutely love it! I feel like you're right in front of me, talking to me, lol.

nae_k October 16 2008, 21:05:09 UTC

Heh. Probably because I write as I speak and don't think enough about what I'm typing when I am. :D

But thanks for the compliments!

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nae_k October 18 2008, 00:00:46 UTC

Yes, I kinda did the stupidest thing of my life and deleted the wrong story on fp, so once I removed the correct one, there was nothing left!

Weeell, I can send you a story I wrote about 6mths ago--my Art and Patty story. I'm yet to fix it up (it's got lots of those adverbs I was talking to you about!). I guess I see that story now as playing about with the characters, developing them, getting a handle on who they are, rather than the "real" story. I'm thinking of reworking and rewriting the whole thing for NaNoWriMo... I could be getting ahead of myself here, but I'm beginning to suspect the story might just benefit from a plot.

:D

I'll email it to that address you gave me.

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nae_k October 19 2008, 22:50:33 UTC

I just read your email--Wow! Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm so glad to hear you liked the characters and several other things (I'm glad you didn't come back with a, "Just bin it, Renae. There's no hope for this story.").

I've written you a long email in response to yours.

You know what? Having you read this now has been great for NaNo prep: suddenly I've all sorts of plot solutions jumping through my head, when 6mths ago, I couldn't work any of it out. (I think I needed time away from it)

Thanks again!

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bree_bee22 October 22 2008, 23:11:17 UTC

Oh, I really like the singer's voice! It's so pretty.

This reminds me of the '60s. When I hear it, I get images of long brown skirts and long hair and yellow daisies and yellow-green grass being blown by the breeze and people sitting on woven blankets with acoustic guitars. :D