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danceonstardust January 13 2009, 06:00:28 UTC
hey naika! Great job but I have to point out a few errors... sorry. JMo wasn't alone at the awards. Her sister was with her and you put Cameron instead of Jennifer in this sentence. "She looked around. Omar and Jesse still didn’t show up. Robert was busy talking to Gaby and Hugh remained in his position, his profile facing Cameron." but otherwise I like what you did here.
It was subtle but sweet! :D

Jude

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naika7 January 13 2009, 06:16:32 UTC
Hey thanks for pointing out the Cameron thing, I am soooo used to typing her name all the time :) I knew she was there with her sister, I meant the pair-less aspect of it :)

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mabe85 January 13 2009, 07:00:28 UTC
*squee*
There's nothing that could make me happier than a Hugh/Jen RPF :D
This is very sweet, and somehow seems true:
He felt like she was so amazingly open with him, as if she made sure he saw her entirely and without reservations. But he knew it wasn’t that simple, he knew she had her own demons. It was written in her smile, in her persistence at being careless and happy.
I love that part because sometimes that's actually how I feel about Jen. And from the way he looks at her, I always believe that's the way Hugh feels about Jen, too :)
Also love this part: “Jen, you’ve got to stop doing this to me. Looking as beautiful as you do, you’ve got to stop being so nice”. Again, it rings true to me somehow :DD

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naika7 January 14 2009, 06:47:17 UTC
It's what I feel too Bere. I've read people who thought her to be a backstabbing b!tch, but I think she is always genuine, just not perfect you know?

I love you for pointing out the quotes you like. Thank you!

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mabe85 January 14 2009, 07:31:26 UTC
What? Who would call her a backstabbing bitch? What has she ever done?
I don't understand why someone could hate a person he/she doesn't even know. You don't have to know someone to like him/her, but you have to really know someone to hate that person. And that's the truth.

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naika7 January 14 2009, 17:03:36 UTC
Oh they were just some Chase/Cam- Jesse/Jen fans who blamed her for the break up :)

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sam_doc January 13 2009, 07:55:54 UTC
Very sweet and I could totally imagine this conversation to the pic *love*

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naika7 January 14 2009, 06:45:06 UTC
Yay, I am glad it rang true :) Thanks so much.

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autumnfairytale January 13 2009, 08:14:31 UTC
*sigh* I adore this, and it is so welcome since we hardly get to see them on the show together anymore! I love your RPF's so much, this was a real treat.

Teresa

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naika7 January 14 2009, 06:44:41 UTC
Thanks for reading Teresa, I always get inspired by pics, promos and such :) I always appreciate your comments!

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hugh_the_man January 13 2009, 11:30:59 UTC

This was really beautiful. And sad in a way. But then again I do believe there's a strange kind of beauty in sadness.

Truly wonderful fic!

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naika7 January 14 2009, 06:43:33 UTC
Thanks so much for reading!

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