Be Mine Chapter 5

Sep 07, 2009 17:31


Title: Be Mine

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be mine, chapter 5

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rayray0826 September 7 2009, 23:52:42 UTC
Chinen's getting obsessive over Yuto. It's so cute! I loved how he tried to play off the yelling part: "'Hey! Hey! Hey! Bokura wa heisei Only! Shouwa de Show wa muri! Hahaha, you guys are doing great I just felt like singing.' Chinen felt his cheeks go red out of embarrassment, ‘How lame,’ he thought."

Yuto senses that something's wrong with Chinen...I hope the latter feels comfortable to open up to Yuto very soon! Thanks for doing a double update this weekend ^_^

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nakachii September 8 2009, 03:07:22 UTC
haha yes jealous Chinen is adorable! I'm glad you liked Chinen's lame excuse for yelling, lol thanks for reading <3

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nakachii September 8 2009, 05:29:15 UTC
Oh and make it triple because a chapter will be up tomorrow =D

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hotfruits September 8 2009, 00:10:00 UTC
Oh YutoChii ♥

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nakachii September 8 2009, 03:07:41 UTC
<3 XD

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sayagch September 8 2009, 06:13:04 UTC
Hi! I don't really know how I ended up in your lj but I read the 5 chapters at once and just loved it! It's so cute! I felt sad for Yuto xD he's my favorite!

You know, I don't really like shonen-ai nor yaoi, but I started reading your story and I just couldn't stop haha, I think your writing is very good, so keep it up and I hope everything goes well for those two!

Thank you for writing! ^^

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nakachii September 8 2009, 15:43:03 UTC
Oh wow, thanks so much! ^_^ I'm so happy to hear your enjoying the story despite the fact your not a fan of shonen-ai XD I'm so happy haha

I will definitely keep it up and your very welcome!

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taiga_luise September 8 2009, 08:00:45 UTC
Aw~
You were really fast with that chapter!!
And I'm happy about it *__*
*hugs*
I hope that Chii is going to talk about his problems with Yuto!
And I loved the scene were he got upset about the okajima-closeness xDD
*giggle*
Waiting for the next chapter!!!
Yay~

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nakachii September 8 2009, 15:46:38 UTC
*hugs back* haha I wish I could always update fast *sighs*
but next chapter goes up some time today! =D
Yes I know, a jealous Chinen is so cute haha <3

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hikarinoniji September 8 2009, 10:19:30 UTC
Yay!! And you're back again XD I'm supposed to do my homework now, but seriously, this is more fun! (though I'll start my homework right after writing this comment)
I loved the chapter, seeing Chinen's character getting more dept, and seeing how he slowly bgins te realise his suroundings.

Loved the chapter and can't wait for more! : D!

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nakachii September 8 2009, 15:51:46 UTC
ahh homework *sighs* me too I should start as well >_> lol We must do our best! haha (But after I put up one more chapter today...and continue writing the next one following :x haha)

I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter! ^_^ Thanks! =D

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