Oh my GOD this was great. So perfectly completely imperfect. This is miles better than any "and then they had sex" fic because it's so much more real, with her pushing but almost not knowing what she's pushing for, and him just being so matter-of-fact and yet caring. I don't think I've ever loved him more in a fic.
GUH, is what I'm saying here. GUH. And please write more.
Aww, thank you! Glad Jeff worked for you. This is less of my fantasy!sexy Jeff and more of what I think show!Jeff would actually do. So happy to know it seemed believable.
In my brain, angst > fluff, b/c almost anything that's dysfunctional is interesting, so it's fun to keep that in mind while speculating about J/A. The nice thing about this pairing, too, is that it can manage to be dyfunctional and omgsoadorable all at the same time. (So compared to writing House and Lost fic, that's also a breath of fresh air, haha.)
Sooo happy you enjoyed the second one. Thanks again for dropping a comment!
I sort of want to cry this is so good. Annie trying to plan everything out and not knowing what she wants and doing things because she saw them in a movie - those little details are so perfect and so her. And Jeff - what can I say? The entire part of the conversation where he was trying to make her go to bed was amazing and so so real.
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GUH, is what I'm saying here. GUH. And please write more.
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In my brain, angst > fluff, b/c almost anything that's dysfunctional is interesting, so it's fun to keep that in mind while speculating about J/A. The nice thing about this pairing, too, is that it can manage to be dyfunctional and omgsoadorable all at the same time. (So compared to writing House and Lost fic, that's also a breath of fresh air, haha.)
Sooo happy you enjoyed the second one. Thanks again for dropping a comment!
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Off topic: is your username a Desmond reference? <3
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